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Definitely a talented writer, that much is a given. This story starts off strong with excellent writing skills and character descriptions. Unfortunately, I'm not able to read for very long on a screen because it tends to hurt my eyes after a while, but I will definitely be coming back a couple times a week to check this story out.
It's one of the best story I've ever read I had to read it twice maybe three times cuz the author won't match release the chapters even though I gave them power stones now I'm going to have to read it again while for chapters
Wow, must be the most corrupt novel out there. Not only can you not watch ads to get the next chapter, the price to unlock chapters are 8 stones AND they have like 50 chapters locked. Just look at power ranking number 1, library to heaven's path. 4 stones or watch an add, and just two chapters are "locked"/"bonus chapters".All this for a half-arsed story with too much reliance on modern knowledge and a boring mc that doesn't even have any real powers... Yeah, nah.
The concept of this novel is very unique compared to the other game novels.For now(ch 40) it looks quite interesting.I hope the author makes it more better in the future.
Let me see...System ✓Reincarnation ✓World Bulding ✓Weak to Strong ✓Magic ✓Insects ✓Hmm... It's a yes from me! Hope this money-grabbing site selects this gem!
I love the story the protagonist is involved in the world and is not really dumb or overly heroic or easily falling for and doing everything for women kbecause their women and he should’ the world gets a basic explanation at the start which gets more developed as the book goes on. Have not finished it yet but this is definitely e of my favourites!
from vr suddenly to pcit really makes me wanna punch the author facedear author, stop writing and get some real job. stop burdening your parents
This novel is unique and interesting in my opinion. Keep up the release rate and you are destined to be in top 10!About the story: World is not too detailed but this helps the story progressing. Balance between real the world and virtual reality is good. You will not get confused. Not much grammar errors. The story is progressing in good pace. Good flirting and R-16 scenes.Advice: Do not repeat the last sentence of the previous chapter in the next chapter. That's just takes up the space. You can add a bit more details and use a wider range of words. I don't know how the MC looks like, please change this!(This review is made when the novel just started and I will change it as time passes. Hope everyone gained something from this post.)
Read about 40 chapters and had to stop reading (for now) . Very interesting world and the story seems to also become more interesting . So why did I stop? Well unless you like to read how pretty much every side characters (I guess at least once every chapter) are stunned and/or amazed by how the MC is a guy instead of a girl, how he has such soft skin, and how it makes women envious and men jealous, then this will get on your nerves.The characters designs are often also a bit boring. Instead of describing a character based on unique features (like a crooked nose), you get to hear why someone is beautiful or average. In other words telling instead of showing.It is also hard to gauge the intelligence of this MC. Sometimes he sounds smart, like using a rock throwing game in his favour. Other times he sounds like a idiot, like when he dismisses a skill allowing him to shoot through walls without considering any other uses for it like being able to penetrate armor or shields.If you can read past those kind of descriptions every chapter then I would definitely recommend this. The game is fun, the world is great, and the class is one I don’t think is used often. Props to the author for writing an interesting novel, I just need a break from all the trap and beauty descriptions.
A very sad 2/5 for its spark of originality. The MC is supposed to be like one of the primordial Gods in a newly made world. But he starts from 0 cultivation and has knowledge of the future like all other gods, but this futere can be altered. Confused?I dare say you will never meet a more INCONSISTENT novel ever. The time intervals are completely irrelevant. By chapter 2 the MC has cultivated for milions of years and then after many other years goes to impart cultivation techniques to the ordinary creatures which do not really know what its like. BUT in just 10000 years these commoners which have no preordained knowledge or countless treasure like the MC does, they achieve a jigher realm than the MC. This is just an example from myriad.The author just dumps a lot of random lore, impossible to remember or see the bigger picture. And the translotors, which are average at best, just translate it robotically. Lots of terms that are not explained is really annoying. For MC character, utterly illogical. An otaku apparently which magically transforms and becomes the most productive guy ever, because we k ow otakus are very hardworking. He cultivates for milions of years but still always thinks of his previous 0.000001% life on Earth. No character interaction whatsoever. This novel it is honestly pure sh1t, so don't give it a chance.