The beginning was pretty solid, but man, they really threw some random tragedy at the main character, which felt a bit forced. After that though, the story was moving along nicely, keeping a good flow. But as soon as the MC left the Village for the next town, things started to drag. Plus, the plot armor was so thick. The villains just kept messing with him, and all he did was think, "I'll remember this, I'll get you back someday," without really doing anything about it. Maybe the author wanted to show the MC's growth in excruciating detail, but it just made the story super slow and it's frustrating to see those villains keep coming back for more.
I like this story very much, Download this for just this story ????
An undead ghost mommy "living" her new life to the fullest, protecting her friends and punishing the bad guys. I read almost a hundred chapters and I can't wait to see what her next move will be. XDFunny, heartwarming and with action, one of the best stories I've read here.
Second shameless review!!After writing more than a hundred chapters and being contracted, I felt I should do a review and say what I think about the book.Q. Will there be a harem?A. I have added multiple female leads to the story now and they all have things going on in their lives. Sophia and Marigold are traumatised and Kivela is trying to find her place in the world. Osmond also is rather young now, so I don't know. Q. Is the book dark?A. Yes it is. I have given warnings at the beginning of dark chapters.Q. Will there be a system?A. I have not added the tag because the story as of now, doesn't have a system. But I am planning to bring a character with a reincarnated character with a system in the future, so I guess I should add those tags.Q. Writing quality?A. I am a writer who has just started. English is not my first language. I am improving every day and with every word I write. And with that, I also have found out that my initial chapters are bad compared to the latest ones. So I am planning to go back and edit the whole thing once volume one is completed. Q. When will volume one be completed then?A. It's in the last arc now. I am planning to write five volumes for this book if everything works accordingly.Q. Chapter update?A. I try to update one chapter a day. I am currently writing with my mobile and it is a hastle.And finally, thank you for reading my book. You can give ratings, reviews, power stones and gifts to show your support and love.
The best novel out there. The only novel I not only know the release schedule but the hour of the release and after all this time (sence chapter 28) I still come to read it every day with the same excitement as the first day. And the more I read the more I get addicted to it.Keep the great work and I hope this novel never ends I hope ants can have children and we can see the great ant empire rise and conquer the planet and later the universe.
Incredible story with characters that reflect their own personalities. Beautiful descriptions and the pictures illustrate well the author's world backround. The main character is engaging and I look forward to seeing where he takes me. I can't wait to see what happens next!
currently at chapter 73 and im dropping it why?because i all mc problem are being solve without him taking the inatiative to solve it or him solving the problem himselfwell not all but stilll most of it it was as if the problem appear and somekind of magical force landed in his hand and solve his current problem the concept is great and the flow of story and writing qulity is good but it really irritate me when most of mc problem are being solve by pllot armor,some kind of systrem, or something
A great start can’t wait for more... so like please continue this novel I’ll be sad if it ends here.alalllllalalalalallalalaallalsjdbskalibsnakd
As of chapter 34, the novel for me is a 10/10. Nothing much I can complain about that hasn't already been reviewed on. Good job author!XPXPXPXP
I read the book n I'm going to b honest....its a readable one lol...author u did ur part very smooth...highly recommended n pray support this book....
(C91) the mc seems almost too childish despite the harsh conditions he was in and even the goal seems so weak? something he can achieve once he evolves. Also the story it self the development is so how would you say it? boring? slow? like its so incredibly slow that it takes like 2-3 chapters to just explain how tasty a soul is and the fights oml i believe the fights his has arent worth the 3 or so or even more chapters on em since they arent that significant imo to have that much focus on to the point that i can just skip the fight and get told what happened in the chapter after the fight and i miss out on nothing. Also his bloodline power you might as well say he has a better version of the mcs power in solo levelling. As well his use of the dark element is boring and not at all 'smart' since darkness imo is either like how most stories show it as either a necromancy type of element or an assassin type of element with silent and quick qualities, in this its just show to be a binding and kinda just useless element. ------But despite all that its a good premise that mixes the plot of becoming a demon and there being different levels of realms that lower you go more stronger overall the demons are and the quality of nether and having the way of conquering planets is very interesting and probably the thing that intrigues me the most since it would be funny to see such a childish mc conquer a world.--
Just tbe type of novel I have been wanting to read. Good grammar far better than many novels in this site. The plot structure is awesome and the character design is so great that I give all my power stone to you. Keep up the good work