Well honestly it's pretty good to read, just fix about the grammar and It's done, i'm Indonesian and support this novel, and one more is to fix the update posts schedule not like beetwen 3-8 pm(8gmt)
In my first review I said that the only bad thing is the grammar.Guess what! Grammar is improving and if there are errors it’s almost unnoticeable. Still the book itself, the writing style and the characters didn’t lack anything. 5/5 would most definitely recommend. Great book don!
I've read up to the current raw (volume 14, about 850 chapters), and Douluo Dalu 4 is just as great as the 1, 2 and 3. Xuanyu is a born leader. At the very beginning, I thought he'd be more innocent than the previous MCs of Douluo Dalu, but he's just as devious, if not more. It's the Douluo Dalu MC who commands the most respect out of everyone he meets the fastest, which makes sense considering his Dragon God bloodline and his future prospects. His destiny is great, but so will be his burden, as we've been spoiled that the enemies in DD4 will be on a whole other scale of powerful from previous DD series. An intergalactic scale. One important thing to mention :You'll realize once more chapters are up that Xuanyu takes a lot of time to level up his spirit power, compared to his friends. Although he lags behind, which may frustrate some people for the first few volumes, you'll realize that it actually doesn't matter. Each time he gets a new ring, it's a complete qualitative change of his power (the rise of his power is exponential), so he actually stays as powerful (if not more) than his friends even though they have a clear gap in spirit power. Although this caused some problems for him early in the story, but where I am at, people who know about him have stopped judging his power based on his spirit power level. And people who don't know about him and wonder why his Shrek classmates act as his minions / Shrek teachers treat him as precious jade are soon given a nice surprise. So fear not, all the frustrations you may get in the first few volumes will be compensated afterwards. I'm saying this for anyone who likes op Mcs, may have followed DD, and wonder why MC seems weak at the beginning compared to other MCs.Xuanyu is the most op MC possible in terms of future prospects, bloodline and flexibility of his abilities, as you'll slowly find out, and it's great that he doesn't progress too fast so his friends can still be at a similar level as him while growing up. Otherwise, he'd be the first lonely MC of the DD franchise.
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Thanks for the original and the one who started the translation of this great novel. If you want to know that this novel is good ..... well go read the review in novelupdate and decide by yourself. BTW why this novel posted in qidian ? as far as I know this novel should be the right of wuxiaworld, right ? sorry for my ignorance because I do not see any statement from Ren (Wuxiaworld)
you are bored from the typical cliche scenarios. then this novel is for you, completely madness.mc has a daring personality that doesn't fear death itself even with his weak power.
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This book is simply a masterpiece. The author has taken a cleché troupe and reinvented it, which is hard to do. The way that it is written makes you wanting more; simply well done.
Thank you very much for this guide. It helped a lot and has many practical instructions. I hope you increase the update rate since a lot of us are currently writing our novels and need this as soon as possible. There are certain topics I hope you'd address in the next chapters. One problem that is bugging me is how can I do plot twist, I hope that my novel is different from the average one and I don't want it to be like the reader would expect. I also have a problem with the number of arcs in the story. I made a basic outline for the whole plot and feel that my novel is too short. Should I add some side stories?
It is a great systems novel! There is only 5 chapter so far and it is created very well. The story is enjoyable, and the introduction is done effectively. The world created seems very diverse and rich. The author definitely has done his/her research making the world seem very much like, and RPG game, but there are other elements, which are new and not seen before making the world unique. The writing quality and grammar are decent, some minor mistakes that can easily be solved after a reread. The MC is described well and you already get a feel of him in the first 5 chapters. I am sure we will learn more about him as the story progresses. Well done! I will continue reading this enjoyable story.
Great story. Amazing characters. Love to just read this in my spare time. I've read all the chapters for now and will continue to read because it's just that good. Thank you for make this and it has been a true adventure to read this.
first off this series is highly anticipated by those in the know. invayne is a superb author, with both a good grasp of the language and an insane amount of creativity.soul fusion online or sfo has elements of many vrmmorpg stories. some elements of the story remind me of the best parts of stories like rssg, and martial gamer while avoiding most of thier pitfalls that make mmorpg stories disliked by some.the main character and other support characters are well thought out, relatable, and can be pictured as people instead of designed characters. they have their flaws and thier strengths instead of just being op or just cute they are much more. at the time of writing this review the story is still within the first ark but already it's addicting to read. I continue to look forward to this series as yuki/Ryu grow as both a person and gain status and power to seek the freedom they deserve.vote comment and like to promote this new gem of a novel.