Author didn't described Rin yet but so far it is good.Stability of the updates is good.He is publishing one or two chapters per day.System isn't that powerful and there is no plot armor at least for now.Author makes some typos but it isn't a problem enough to stop reading.I liked the bond between Haru and Rin but Haru seems like obsessed with Rin.If i consider his past then it must be normal.I suggest this book and author's imagination is vast so it is impossible to be bored.
Well done! Very nice plot, and good grammar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As good as it gets for this type of novel. He is invincible and above everyone, as it should be if the title and description are what they are.Every single other novel with similar titles has pathetically weak MCs that NEVER live up to the novel's title until the last chapter. They take 1400 chapters to get strong, while regular people somehow keep up with them even though these MCs have cheats.There is none of that idiocy here. The MC is unashamedly stronger than everyone.His single purpose is to enjoy life however he pleases. There doesn't need to be something to grind for. Having said that, I agree that the author could have given him more interests/hobbies.Very cool, sit back and relax type of novel.
Wow. Just wow. I have absolutely no words. The author was incredible with the descriptive writing, I almost felt like I was there. Well done, keep up the good work.
Wow this story is amazing. I personally like character growth's story. And this one seems like it. Looking forward to the journey of princess turned knight.
Not much to write about. 25 in and I am hooked. Just pick this Webnovel so I can enjoy life!
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The story is nothing new but interesting enough to give it a read. The main problem is the translation quality, with it getting worse as the book progresses. It would be great if the story received some editing.
Raw title: 超时空评测Status: 415 Chapters (Completed)..............................................................................................................................................
yo...I didn't think another hype novel like conquerors path. Man this has a lot potential just don't drop like other authors !!
It was really fun reading this novel, not bad for a novel written for the first time but it needs improvements in the scientist area where is the scientific aspect in this story?
First off this is going to be a complaint or just hating I guess so don’t really expect Constructive Criticism..Now that’s out of the way 1 reason on why I don’t like this FF would be how MC just interact with the SCP Verse. He was literally so emotional in the 1 chapter for family but the moment he knows that he is in the SCP verse he suddenly forgets them and then literally has the biggest hero complex ever to just save the tragic SCP that were kill/abandoned/forgetten by the Foundation when he literally says that he knows more than the Foundation so he should at the bare minimum think of the perspective the foundation do to these SCP.2 Reason he knows that these are fictional character but idk if I understand what Author is trying to say but he thinks he can’t essentially be killed since he is from the “real world” where as the SCP is just fictional.Final reason MC to support the Hero complex is the fact that he automatically and I mean automatically make it sounds like the foundation is the Big Evil Villain of the story while he is the Hero?I‘ll just be giving this 3 since No story so far in my experience can make me give a 1 other than GhostyZ himself but thats another story