look, reading the starting, I thought I'd like it..MC want to find love and have a peaceful life, plus tags said smart and badass.4 chps in and this MC is a retard...the english is messed up but somewhat readable, its the story that annoying....see this MC was some strong dude in his past life, thats fine..dope, but he behaves like a retard. He dosnt sense his sister looking at him despite being far stronger than her [this important cause the sis starts having an attraction towards him after seeing him be so strong, seems like a shallow *****]. Then this MC joins a competition and pulls out a super skill and immediately kills his opponent. Not smart, or badass, its retarded, he doing the opposite of what he wanted. PLus its seems CD isnt that big of a focus considering MC has a skil that just makes chicks attracted to him..so yah, point is, u want CD, smart MC, well GL cause its not here
So far so good nice one author i really like it i hope you will continue updating this novel ……………...…................…….....….................
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I came searching for a good sports novel. Stumbled upon this gem. Binged this novel and I can't get enough of it. MORE MORE MORE I WANT MORE
This story is amazingly written and pulls you in right away. The events and actions of the character as well as their personalities are outside of the usual and expected. You never know what will happen. Each is a mystery to be solved, and leaves you with a slew of thoughts and emotions for every action the characters take. This book is definitely worth reading. If you haven’t started and are wondering if you should, the answer is every moment you waste considering is a moment you could have enjoyed reading this book.
Honestly, I don't really want to make a review until there are more chapters, but brother author hasn't uploaded in a while and I worry that the author is unmotivated, so, I'll make a reveiw to hopefully convince him to satisfy his reader with another beautiful chapter. So far, it's a pretty nice fanfic. I like how the MC isn't straight off the back super sayan one punch man OP and is slowly building his power up. I don't really notice much grammer mistakes, and if there were, I was breezing through the chapters too fast to notice them. So far, there isn't much for me to say, but I really hope Author uploads more chapters. SCP novels are rare, so I cherish the few.
The summary : Do not read thisMe : Understandable have a great day
The novel is only so-so. There are flaws with logic and overall there's no depth. Just gain a system and become cocky overnight. He was so desperate before obtaining it... and is still stupid after obtaining it.
So, is this done for good? or Not? I vaguely remember something about it being restarted after the end of one of your other fics, and I'm just wondering if thats still a thing?If not, thats cool. I just wanna know since I like it lots.
I still don't get it. did I read it wrong. I thought that death mode while having more difficulty's it was suppose to give better and more rewards for completing quest, and killing animals than the other modes. so why is he getting the same a everybody else
is quite good. ............................................................................................
Well great start no weak to strong mc directly op mcGreat good vocublary now 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters ?????????????????????????????