Apolonchene06
such a nice story, i love the way author write and tell the character. Keep it up. good job [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a good story with a good plot mc level progress is a little bit fast but that's understandable since he is op in this world so far everything is good I enjoy reading this story.
Instant 5* can't believe I came upon this gem when I'm on my way to FL novels. Mc is selfish but caring toward his loved ones.
If you are tired of harem novels (like I am) this novel is for you. The romance is progress very quickly so you don't need to wait 100+ chapters, best thing in this novel is that they also show side character relationships (I know some harem novels have that too but they always end up being overshadowed by Mc and his harem).
Ps:I'm bad at reviews, anyway xD do your best author!! I absolutely love this novel and I hope you will continue until the very end (I'll be here with you
INITIAL THOUGHTS:
-Ive recently caught up again with the chapters I stockpiled and decided that I wanted to give potential readers a window view of this great novel.
WRITING QUALITY:
-The short answer is Top Quality.
-The longer answer is the author has done a great job of keeping the writing understandable using proper grammar structure which for what I call “Original Authors” is something that doesn’t always happen. When this novel plateform first started and for most of it’s inception afterwards you’ve had Chinese authors hiring translators who have a high level of English proficiency. This lead to a quality of content most of us readers got used to and only really noticed with new authors exploded on the platform. Overall 5/5.
UPDATING STABILITY:
-Consist from beginning to now. Averaging 1 a day or 7 a week it’s much better then many authors who seem to burn out after releasing at least twice that amount. Overall 5/5.
STORY DEVELOPMENT:
-Anyone who has read a fair amount of novels knows that their isn’t one universal story development. We read many decent to masterful stories with varying plots. What we do know even if we can’t put it into words is when a story progresses badly. This novel happens to fall into the great category.
-The Main Character (MC) is transported to a cultivation world with many underlying mysteries that accompany his beginning. Most of the time we stick with the MC seeing his progress while at times be shown other characters that add to the overall world in a way that connects to the MCs progress now or in the far future. This is great for a number of reasons
-One is how plot points are not only made in the short term, but also in the long term making many events that were a mystery unfold naturally. So while some plot points seem too distant to connect at first get gradually uncovered showing there deep implications. Two many people introduced in different factions and power levels are having a major effect on the story developing in ways we have yet to understand.
-Overall I see great things for the story now and later. 5/5.
CHARACTER DESIGN:
-Short answer again is great.
-The MC is positioned in the world as someone within and outside of it. Living a life as a human before and a demon now is taking the best of both worlds so he becomes someone who can make a impact. Ruthless and kind. Distant to some close to others. Prideful yet humble enough to recognize his faults. One of my top MCs.
-Close characters are multi dimensional showing there support for the MC and the greater story development. Slowly but surely we see a group form around the MC each bringing color to what could have been a solitary life. I don’t want to give spoilers, but I’ll say that 2 females closest to the MC each bring out more sides to each other’s character development. Overall 5/5.
WORLD BACKGROUND:
-Deep and mysterious. The MC is slowly unveiling through his exploration what seems to be a complicated world. Many races known like Demons, humans, and dragons while many more briefly mentioned. Also various Apex wars that have happened for reasons unknown. The list goes on and on leaving wanting more. Overall 5/5.
This type of novel is hypocritical so losing brain cells is highly conducive
i read the first chapter of the mtl and it is way worse than this, genders weren't separated and this is overall a better reading experience than the mtl
i am giving 5 stars because i love genshin and your story is great i hope this story wont drop cause i really like it
This is a total cool OP story. i actually hate most OP stories but here the MC...let's just say I don't mind it. Anyways, the world building is very unique and the best thing in this story. It's a lot like Overlord type of setting but without the game like vibe. Just real life
This is such a blast, hilarious narrative, I just can't stop chuckling from time to time even when I am traveling or at work. This is 5 out of 5 on all categories. Religious category 5/5 . Comedic narrative 5/5. Culture quality 5/5. I want 2,000 of these chapters. A good fun read like these is so rare that in never gets completed and dropped. Please support this sensei!
Story seems interested, but the Synopsis is just a mess. Its confusing and does not accurately represent exactly whats going on. All I picked up was that he gets trapped in game, becomes emperor, somehow takes game army to real world and fights world government (who again somehow did something called a "soul harvest") and then somehow wins. Is that the whole plot of the book explained or is that everything before the book even starts?
The Good is very excellently written. Well done my boy. The sky is ur limit.. Shine on like the sky. The next book u wld write wld be about me when am leaving the Presidency. I promise you. Am sure you wlould win no doubt about it.
Thanks author you did a great job at making I like the way you decided to make the character more to the passive side then what most others would not many light novels sit the mc as a passive guy and fewer have the mc making things and this is the only one I read where the mc dose music.
**. Thanks keep up the good work can't wait for more chapters
