MTL.
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The fact that it is an original, and you could still come up with this kind of suspenseful synopsis, makes reading this novel worth the time.
Then there's the treasure, 'The Eye of Myriad Universe'. Catchy name, cool synopsis, and a unique cover page. You have my attention. [img=update]
Pretty good book. A guy gets a cheat in a game that allows him to chat with monsters, a unique idea amongst all the other generic cultivation books on Webnovel. But unlike other novels of the same genre where the npc’s seem like real people and don’t know that they are in a game, the npc’s in this novel are aware of things like stats, exp, levels, and the system.
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Overal the mc got trans. into a game? i think or another world... he can get vitality points from cutting trees,farming and upgrade his stats... working under a feudal lord and basicly its a survival/wild life with building novel...similar too forest if i should say..its relaxing and unique novel ...if you want many action maybe theres but i didnt read that much only till 60 ch... but its good if you want relax and enjoy it
Came to wram people that there’s a bit of Chinese nationalism in this novel.
I’ve read the raw to around chapter 200~
Around the piont where the invading alien demons speak english and has revolvers.
You would think there would be no chinese nationalism in an translation novel but nooo, apparently not.
Suffice to say this novel is not heading in a good direction.
Readers be warned!
is this the same as the one in wattpad? if it is then you shoul finish this story here since the one in wattpad is (in my opinion) incomplete. so PLEASE finish this!
This novel is great and I recommend you try this. Grammar is good and the mc is evil or rather he will do anything for his goals and purpose. You will feel like you are watching a movie when reading this, the scenes are described well and the definitions are also great. As a ghost Negary is an evil existence that manipulates people to get the best of what a human can offer.
Spoiler At the end
Writing quality 3.8 out of 5
The author writing quality is somewhat above average
he has not made any large mistakes just some small things here and there so its a cut above average but not top tier.
Updates 4.1 out of 5
The author has updated quite stable the reason why i put 4.1 is because its not frequent around 3-4 chapters a week
story development 3.2 out of 5
So the story is intriguing but its quite fast pace since you will read about being in a cave to out on the fields,
Then there are several unnecessary other than the MC povs that pops up from seemingly anywhere and then pops back onto Mc witch is in a whole new scenario than when you left him in.
I wouldn't care much if it only happend 3 or 4 times but it was like 6 or 7 it quite honestly ruined the flow the story and it felt like the athour was only filling in for the word count had but aside from that if you just skip the povs and focus on the Mc the story is still great.
Character Design 3.4 out of 5
Now if i had to describe it its extremely vague we get he is somewhat evil and tyrannical but we really dont know what his motives are it feels like one of those superhero villains that has one emotion put into them and we just follow that he is somewhat like a robot except with a lot of anger there isn't any laughter or being amused or even happiness outside of combat.
so MC is a quite interesting character except i wished he showed some other emotions on how he reacts to his subordinates or even thinks just show how he thinks about them cause the only thing explaining them is scheming or cunning war-like.
All side characters where basically based on a concept
cunning scheming war-like airhead-like reckless this could be good in some cases but when you dont show off the side characters personality
it becomes hard to connect to them.
Thought they all have somewhat off a personality but the moment you have a chance for them to express them and understand them a pov cuts it off or some text like going into the future for 30 min.
World background 4.9 out of 5
it seems like a solid world cant say much about the author seems like he has a good idea on how he wants to build the world as a whole and im okay with it.
personal opinion and overall score 3.9
Personally i quite enjoy this novels there are sometimes some gaps of logic in the novel where i have to go back and read the part again but for the most part it makes sense and i quite enjoy the novel.
It is a kingdom building, action novel that is based with the Mc as a orc
It puts the main character of this novel into another novel thought this isn't explained that well and Mc background is seemingly from a yakuza/mafia/gang background and he seemed to have had some position there but probably not the highest ranking one cause his anger and ambition seemingly comes from both arrogance and ill feelings towards his former boss.
for the most part this is a good novel except some parts it mentions things seemingly out of nowhere and there isn't much of an explanation to why he came into that sense of logic or how we/he got to know that.
The story already seems pretty amazing and very interesting. My favorite character is already the leader Eternus. I just can't wait to see more of what the story becomes.
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Well it was sure intresting read so far. Author has presented the love story in unique and interesting way. I literally can't wait for more chapters to read what further happens in story. If you are fan of hot romantic story this is sure pick for you.