Apolonchene06
I really like thisy and u don’t see many American football ns so please keep updating
The book has a nice plot and the way you present it to us readers is also approvable. But the problem is your grammar and choice of words. Actually, I'm also facing this dilemma at first as an author, but as days go by as a write I continue to grow. I improve a lot and mistakes are lessened. So I hope you continue this work and also improve as a writer. Good luck!
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Finally, finally, finally.... Can't wait for this get picked up.... I hope you can also translate xiling empire, as it is where it all starts :)
I am not good at reviews and am not qualified to judge writing quality. All I can say is that this book so far is quite enjoyable. I look forward to many more chapters. Give this book a try and hopefully you will enjoy it too.
So far I read 27 chapters man... It's good .. good story and world creation.. just put a separate chapter for his types of demonic. Beasts he gets .. I really love the arc so far . Continue writing ...all the best.?✌️
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I really enjoy this, however this comes with unfortunate news...this novel ends at chapter 166 under the name: 渡劫八百年,我成了禁忌生命最新章节 it's a dropped novel, i'll take a look if the author made a new one. so yeah it doesnt matter if it's picked or not, it'll be done in 3 months
This novel is just as good as your other ones. However I hope you keep updating it!!!!......................................................................................................................................................................
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Book is fine but the cultivation concept is very wrong. Normal earth becomes a cultivation world, mc is op, he doesn't know any disguise technique whatsoever, till now no earth expansion, nationalism is common tropes so it can be ignored but author is truly ignorant about the people of other countries (here china is tiger, all alone, and other countries are hyenas, living in pack). Also, cultivators are strangely obedient to some fault.That's it, I love the story, I also hope there would be higher world in future chapters.
