Read it simply read it I wouldn’t give 5 star if it bad
this type of novel I like the most, tired of brainless mc harem protagonist then try this novel op mc op storyline everything is op just hoping for future updates author ❤?????
can anyone please tell me in which chapter his full power will be revealed? I just can't bear to read it anymore, I'm stopping at ch 112, this is my limit, I just read webnovels and fanfics to get a distraction from my stressful reality, but this novel is too frustrating and stressful for me
The shameless author is here!Yep, I will rate my story 5 stars cuz- why not? it's not really that bad... it's actually good in my eyes but dunno about you- Well anyways if you either liked it or disliked it just say it in comments or reviews.
love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much. love it very much.
The first space related novel I've read and I must say, it's amazing. The writing style doesn't look like that of a beginner, the story is well planned and easy going.Just the right amount of suspense and thrill. Good job author!!
I don't think i have ever read a story with a dumber mc than this story. the title misleads you to believe someone with common sense will be in the story. Reading this so has cause my disappointment to be immeasurable and my day is ruined.
THIS IS A CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK REVIEW AND DOES NOT PROBABLY RELATE TO THE CURRENT NOVEL'S TRUE RATINGThe novel was surprisingly good. If I were to say anything, you just need to reread your chapters more and put in commas at certain places. Only typo I noticed was you put ,., somewhere at the start I think. Noticed you aren't putting in commas before ands and buts a lot.Also for the story, its not realistic how he found the cube at that place. Countless people visit there every year, how was he the first to find and pick it up after (assuming its from ancient Greece) centuries have passed?Also I would change up your start. Its not interesting for readers to read flasbacks at the start of a book. This is why whe there are flash backs, its always way farther into the book or movie if its poplar.You should also consider a Prologue. This is how you grab people's attention, and interest. This is how they survive the first few chapters. I myself was not interested at the start, but I kept reading.Now I noticed two big plotholes of your story. One is he put countless death marks, but when you jumped into levels, he barely died that much, also he only marked at the start. Then its as if his flashback persnality disapeared and his whole personality changed. As I've read a lot of books and I am also an author, I can guess that the flashback isbfor way farther into the book, but guarantee 99% didnt think that much and just ignored it or thought the book was stupid and left.Second one are the stats, you made stat points really low, but whe MC gained stats rivaling the police officers, he was more macho and studd compared to them? Even more than that scrawny asian guy you said? Also try to describe emotions and five senses more, was bit bland reading. Try to describe things more, and add more relatable thing so its not 2D.Lastly I marked 3 for updates as long hiatus. I would've done two, but looking at your past record and past two days, nearly updated every day so bumped it up to 3. It would've hit four or above if not for that.
I like it, this book is amazing, I like how she died 99 times and she still coma back to life, I hope you release the 5 chapter soon. Good work.
Girls and hopeless romantic introverted guys would love to read this............................................... dots for 140 characters
Una entretenida lectura. Tiene sus alto y bajos pero realmente vale la pena. En lo personal me encanta hasta el momento.??????????????????
Literally a shameless 5 star review from the author.This is my first time writing a web novel, but I've got a wide vision for what is to come in the series. I've taken a lot of inspiration from steampunk literature like the Leviathan Trilogy by Scott Westerfeld and light novel series such as the Saga of Tanya the Evil. This is of course, based in the events of WW1 and will have a lot of parallel events. However, there's going to probably be a lot of deviation from the actual events and the limited POVs will be interesting to develop.All in all, thanks for coming here and feel free to suggest anything that might make the web novel better. I hope you guys will enjoy the story!