Apolonchene06
As a Fellow Author from Indonesia, I sent you my Fullest Support ???? All Five Stars for You?⭐???⭐?
Quality light novel ruined by a poor translator. The person seems to directly translate: conjunctions and punctuation included. This results in many awkward sentences with commas that make them grammatically incorrect.
interesting I love it, and I want more... can't wait for the next chapter....️
This book is amazing!! Love the Rossi and Westwood family!! Muse outdoes herself with her writing!! Definitely recommend this book and all her books!! Can't wait to see what's next for the Rossi's
So far, I can say that the author is talented in writing and plot. However, the dominating men and degredation of women is cringe worthy, and it shows in the alpha a lot. I'm continuing to read, hoping that it will change. I'll re-rate as soon as I'm finished, but so far I'm over 50 chapters...
Too many errors and wring names being used, needs to be better proof reading before release, and the ending was left open, is there to be a follow on book....
looking forward to this episode
Good reading waiting on the ending
An excellent start so far! can't wait to read more!
Eliza's mom is a good person.. although maybe she little bit have a weak personality..
well written story
Characters need more depth.
