Hello dear readers,My name is Auzy, that’s what I like people calling me.Please, I would like it if you could give an honest review about my chapters and generally the novel, so in the process I can become better and give a better quality.I will try to keep my consistency as much as I can.I wish you had a great time reading my novel till now and I really appreciate it a lot.Thanks a lot for your support!!
Some words during descriptions being repeated a little too often, e.g.; Was in the capital of the New World Order. The capital of the New World Order was called New Hope in honor of the New World Order...One paragraph had the descriptor mentioned 6 times.Mix up the sentences a little, maybe shrink it and it would be great. :]The story is interesting but a lot of information to digest in the early chapters. Looking forward to more!
I don’t know how to write reviews so have this cute dog instead please.
I like the beginning of the novel as the author is able to create wonderful world. The characters presented so far are relatable to the reader to a certain degree that allows for the reader to instantly connect. Overall, 5 stars all around and I would give more if I could.
It's so wrong of you to have a novel that could be so much better held back by grammar issues. The story is there, the character is there, but the last of the big three THE GRAMMAR is no where to be found. I can get past the dialogue issue, but you just can't throw commas at a run-on and expect that to solve it.
It has gotten to the point that I'm wondering if you read over what you write. At one point in the Novel you even call the MC a young woman (specifically ch.35). I've tried pretty hard to read this novel, but the mistakes are too glaring to let slide. Even when I skimmed through I was noticing mistakes.
Without an editor I feel I'm being pretty lenient giving it this score. If you are serious about this novel you should really consider working with someone to fix the mistakes.
My guy is really using Baal/Ei (From Genshin Impact) as his book's cover. Pretty poggers.
Since she's my waifu, might as well give it 5*
Respect.
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Personally couldn't make it past the first few chapters. The MC was poorly characterised and was thrown into a gunfight in the first 5 minutes of the novel, only to show "poor aim" headshots and killing 20 people by the end of the 2nd chapter completely on his own.Give this one a miss, there have to be better ones out there than this.
Ohhhhhh myyyyyy GOD the start is good but then the longer it goes the mc started becoming a jerk and a fucking dumbass in the later chapters (based on my research from other sites!!)???and then his oath sister become his ****ing wife and married again fucking psycho old hag who forced marry him and then blablabla???? good style but poor plot and character design
Hi guys, I'm sorry to announce next week, I won't upload any chapter(maybe) , My editor-san and I will fix all grammar and might change some of the storyline starts from Prologue, I will give the fix chapter tag (N). Once Again Sorry -Author-nim
A well-written and nice story! It's a system story but it's entirely different as it involves history. It what makes the story catch readers and the way the system is explained didn't bore me at all. The writing quality is great and updates are fast. Overall, this a good novel to read. Keep it up, author!
This is a real masterpiece. Never have I ever laughed so much in a single chapter , when reading a novel. it's so funny and creative at the same time, that it makes me addicted, waiting impatiently for the next chapter. The author has done a remarkable job in creating a solid world setting, full of interactive characters, events that appear naturally without the feeling of being forced and a main character that stays true to his character, so matter how scummy it makes him appear.???You don't get to see many such novels and I really hope that such a masterpiece gets the recognition it deserves!!!