HCPwnography
I usually don't read stories with male lead but this one is seriously good! The details are perfect and one can easily imagine everything instead of being confused! This is worth reading. Keep updating author!
Sorry to say this but this is my truthful opinion. The cover picture for this novel screams "YAOI" especially when the novel is named like this.
ok, not to knock this book, but we were 3 deep in the voting pool, with actual novels that won voting not getting chapters right away, because others, like this one, jumped the order??idc which books you actually end up choosing, but having a user involved system and ignoring it is much worse than not having a system at all
Have read until chapter 419The concept of the story is not bad.The MC is OP, but not overly OP. Some anoying ticks of the MC, ofcourse.The world background is sometimes a bit unclear and/ or contradicting if i remember correctly. Have been binge reading so the details are a bit fuzzy.The translation is not bad, but either the author or the translator has/had a limited vocabolary or did not know how and where to use some words, such as frantically. It is used everywhere in every situation insted of quicly, hurriedly, anxiously etc. this applies for the first 300 chapters.The translation after chapter 300, which just reacently started again is much worse. Names are sometimes translated/ used differently in 3 following paragrapghs, without capital letters for the first name/ surname etc. The pronouns He/She is not used incorrectly and just plastered wherever. I strongly believe that this must be machine translated without editing as if you actually read the chapters after translation, you would correct the words according to the setting of the story, or I at least would hope they had enough pride in their work to do so. The way the dialogs are written are also a bit weird and "placed" weirdly, aswell as sometimes the same persons dialog is splitt up weirdly'....."'........" which makes reading much harder and less enjoyable. Although i know it is a translated novel site which I chose myself and it is up to me to choose to spend money on it or not, I still feel a bit scamed when they use machine translation, or translate it on that kind of lvl.
Sorry if my reviews are too long but, this a modern day cultivation story, which is pretty uncommon. Now, it's very slow paced but some of you may like it that way since it's slightly reasonable, knowing that there are questions that haven't been solved yet throughout the story. I had few problems reading this at all and it's pretty good, as Qidian chose well. Here's why:Translation Quality: The quality of Qidian's translations are truly one of the best, the editors and translators included. This is always expected from me, and probably most of the readers on Qidian. I literally found no errors in grammar/punctuation and it was all easily read and understood. Updating Stability: The update stability (like always) was always followed by and true from what I've seen. The translators and editors have a schedule and they obey it (5 chapters a week). The translation speed though, could be a little faster, maybe 7 days/week. I say that since the novel is already completed and still has about 2000 chapters to go. Other than that no problems with this.Story Development: The story and plot develops at a VERY slow pace. But if you ignore that, you find almost no problems. If you do read past the beginning, (unlike some other people) you find that it slowly get's better. There is a clear objective and the plot is reasonable and there isn't any plot holes. As the information is also given to you at reasonable times, as it is, the plot is pretty good.Character Design: The main character and some very important characters have personalities and each have goals and backstories. But the side characters aren't really realistic, and girls may fall in love too easily (to the extent of 10 days together = love forever). He easily discards girls even if that happens (for the sake of cultivation) and makes it look like they're side characters, although they aren't, and indeed do help with the development of story and the main character. Which is why this is okay.World Background: The world develops slowly and information is given to you slowly (like I said before). No info dumps and the world development isn't only at the beginning, (like some stories) and it develops throughout the story instead of all the info at the beginning. This makes it comprehensive and allows you to take it all in, and know what's happening.Taking all of that into account, I rate and recommend this story at 4.4 stars! I liked this story and hopefully you do too, just get through the beginning and it'll get better (in my opinion)! Go ahead and read now.
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Please release more chapters, the one and only problem I have with the novel is the upload schedule. Overall I love the story, characters and the unique idea behind it. It's a great read and the development is fantastic. Just PLEASE give us more
I love this kind of story. Its all about taste. The MC have a sloppy character, but then it makes him more human. I love its plot and story movement. Thank you, I've laugh alot ?
So excited to read the sequel to strongest guild master. Currently at about ch21 so far so good great beginning to set you the story can wait to see how far max goes.
I drop this novel after 8 chap. bcoz mc share his secret with his parents that he is reincarnated. and mc parents are like "OK ,NO PROBLEM YOU ARE STILL OUR SON".LOLif it was me i would have directly kill the mf.
I love it! I love all these villain tropes but they're still being good guys like villains diary and gao fueshai but this has him being a real villain lol so it's got a good kind is darkness to it. please done give it up anytime soon!
I'm going to put my humble self at average 3 stars because I'm not shameless enough to show off my broken English and cringe worthy of terrible grammar I put into this novel.I promise that I will trying my best to keep up with at least one chapter a day. Eventhough it took me two freaking days to come up with the first chapter. For some reason, every times I reread my work, I ended up fixing things here and there. 10 drafts later, I still found flaws and kept deleting this line and added this line. 20 hours later, I was banging my head against the wall and gave up rechecking the quality and post it here right away.Please have mercy on this poor soul and go easy on me ... MEAW!
