it is overall a good novel and quite interesting If anyone of you guys have limited patience and can't afford to wait. Then here is the raw:曾经，我想做个好人
Reviewing it while it only has three chapters. It’s a reboot of a decent book so I believe it will be good. Just need more chapters... Bye!!
I must say it is surprisingly good. I know it is might be slow. Here are a few point I want to share: - This is world of magic. I suppose the "Video Game Tag" might be MC think he is transfer into game world full of magic- The world reveal its self as the story progress. It is a bit slow but I didn't mind it.- An insect can be intelligence well that's possible since it is world of magic.- He is in the bottom of the food chain but still he do his best to survive.- All living thing in this novel has special skill and can involve into higher creature.- As I read 60 chapters there are races: dragon, goblin, druid, human, spirit etc.
Honestly the synopsis makes this look like Mc is a federation dog who has it not necessary to work there bur still chose to with a stupid excuse that he earns money.(Look at MC'S ability he has if not necessary)
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exp is my sword and I am it's wielder. Push me to level 4 and I shall be your benefactor.so I pray that you hit the like button and give me my expExp amen
bird is the word . .
Why was this not chosen? It’s a great novel. I’m currently on chapter 22 and you can really see the protagonists growth, both in strength and as a person.
I need to talk about how this author handles pacing because it's honestly masterclass level and I don't say that lightly. Let me take you through a sequence that blew my mind. You start with this intensely intimate, almost romantic scene between Xu Yifan and Xian Qinglin—pill given, body healed, carried back to the bedroom, a kiss that turns out to be on the spot where someone else licked his face. It's tender, it's funny, it's awkward. And then—BAM—you cut to a demonic plant being swung through the air like a baseball bat, sobbing about how nobody loves it. The tonal whiplash is incredible. One moment you're thinking 'aww' and the next you're wheezing. That's not accidental; that's a author who understands that reader attention is a finite resource and you have to keep resetting the emotional dial. Then the structure shifts again into the recruitment chapter, and the pacing here is different—it's slower, more deliberate, almost meditative. The Sixth and Seventh Elders are drinking tea, discussing a murder, bickering about disciples. It feels like a calm before the storm, and that's exactly what it is. The author is giving you space to breathe between the high-intensity moments, but even in this 'calm' scene, there's underlying tension. Ma Xiu is dead. Ma Xiang is coming for them. The Sixth Elder has this weird sixth sense about finding his disciple. Everything is quiet on the surface but vibrating underneath. And then Xu Yifan asks about food and handsome men and immediately agrees to join a sect. The pacing of that exchange is so fast it's almost comedic—setup, question, answer, done. No hesitation, no drama, just straight to the point. It mirrors Xu Yifan's character perfectly and also serves the plot by not bogging down the recruitment in unnecessary deliberation. The chapter structure itself is also worth noting. Each chapter ends on a note that makes you want to keep going. The Xian Qinglin scene ends with Xu Yifan noticing his beautiful fingers and losing composure. The elder scene ends with the Sixth Elder declaring destiny. Xu Yifan's scene ends with that spatial ring and the ominous 'prepared for this.' These aren't cliffhangers in the traditional sense—they're curiosity hooks. You don't know what's coming next, but you know you want to find out. Some parts drag slightly—the investigation of Ma Xiu's death scene goes on a bit long with the elders theorizing—but honestly, that's the only minor complaint. The author knows when to accelerate and when to let scenes breathe. Most writers can't do both.
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Let's say this first. In every Chinese novel there is face-slapping, in some more and others less, we clear? Yes, there happens to a lot of face slaps and most likely there will be a lot more.Ok, basically the mc touches beasts with his body parts and he will immediately know everything about the said beast/pet. The methods to evolution, curing illneses, potential upgrades ect.Now, there exist an occupation called beastmaster tamers whatever so you will know how the face-slaps gonna end.Ok, the mc is just overpowered in his said occupation not in actual strength. Many can kill him though the mc isn't weak either.Okay, now only if you read the later chapters (35 - 40) you would know there is LOTM vibes going on here. (Lord of the mysteries) the mc having his ability (museum) is gonna gather random people into a room where the guests can ask question about their pets to evolve, cure whatever in exchange samples of rare beasts (or other items in the future)Translation - 5* (smooth)SoU - 5* (trial read, always 5 stars)Story Development - 5* (Biased cuz I like the LOTM vibes and sort of copy)Character Design - 3* (There's emotion but not really a solid personality, average?)World Background - 2* (There's no info given, sure where the mc lives and some here and there but it's basically it's name and it's surroundings, no info at all. Maybe in future will it be explained but can't give a high rating. I know it's unfair because only 40 chapters but I am a honest man, have a nice day everyone)Total score: 4.0
Trash the level of writing is bad the author doesnt know how to make the novel exiting too much filler