Till now I liked the book. Writing quality is good and simple. The lead characters are strong. And the story is really unique. Waiting for the new chapters.
Very impressive work! The setting is very interesting, and a relief to see the MC is always clever and thoughful. Please keep uploading it!!
Wow! Compared to quite a number of books I've read, this one has an astonishing begining. The tension is thick, dark yet captivating. Good work author, thumbs up on the descriptions.Keep it up.
A solid, generic cultuvation fantasy with an unlikely protagonist. The isekai genre has a problem in general with pre-transmigration character building. I have a hard time believing a mentally unstable kid who was abused until he committed a murder suicide is capable of this.It could be argued that his talents were suppressed by circumstance (aka abusive father), and a fresh chance at life in a magical world unlocked his potential. However, all we get are strange dreams with no indication that he has any untapped potential.By spending so little time exploring Darius King, Liam's new life feels like a fever dream. With that said, the story from this point is as good as most on this platform.Maybe I'm just tired of the isekai, transmigration formula. Take a loser, outcast, pitiful existence and allow them to be reborn in glory with a system or talent they didn't have before and bake it in the oven. In reality, a pathetic kid in one life will just be a magical pathetic kid in the next.Writing trauma, and its effects, is difficult but to ignore the impact of murdering your father and then yourself weakens your story . Truckkun exists as a plot device for a reason (clean, unexpected break). If you want a spicier pre-transmigration plot, spend some more time exploring it.
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I guess it would have been great if you have divided paragraphs into multiple parts, it would have been easier to comment and read.Please use " text " for what people are speaking.Use ' text ' for inner thoughts.Use [ text ] for system replies.And please decrease the usage of word LOL.I feel story would have been great if it isn't overly OP at start, I like OP characters but the MC here is overly OP, he has 40 dragon eggs and 3 dragons within 10 chapters and he has Harry Potter cast too with him.
Better title would have been "The cute saint among humans".. he is literally so childishly kind and has saint like compassion, makes you wonder how he survived without parents and working part-time with a traumatized sister who was hurt by this ugly world.. which atleast I don't believe are possible for any human, so I can only guess he was a reincarnated saint god or something which doesn't sit that well with me in the character build up... I still feel many other characters are pretty childish as well
Really good so far. The plot is developing in an interesting way and already seems to flow better than the original. Only one typo I’ve noticed so far. But I’m interested in where the story will go next
It's really been a long time since I have read a ML story, because after a time, I had started finding all system stories similar, but this book had given me the hope of getting something new in my platter and must I really like the build up of the MC !! Thank you so much author for such a good and interesting story, keep writing ❤️❤️
We have a talented author here, who knows how to write and executive powerful Main character(Mc) excellently.His previous novel ,Harry Potter fanfiction, breaks most of the cliches in overpowered character stories.Recently, I started to dislike overpowered characters in cultivation novels because in all those novels plot progression is the same(initial plots just way too similar to each other), that is, most of the MC's just cultivate till 1st realm 6th or 7th or 8th stage then a antagonist of 2nd realm comes to fight him. In this fight, Mc will either lose(not die by plot armor) or win(by plot armor). In this novel, Mc goes into close door Cultivation until he becomes 2nd realm then he comes out to face his enemies. This is very refreshing change for me.I once again started to like overpowered characters in Cultivation novels. Only problem with this author is his chapter release rate. Please give this author more support and don't use his novels for stupid experience.
"A red meteor falls down and hits the earth killing several hundred people in less than three hours ...but he wasn’t one of those peoples."- How small is this meteor to only kill hundreds of people in three hours?- If it's a big meteor, how far apart did people live to only suffer hundreds of casualties?- Or did the meteor hit a small village, isolated from the rest of the world?- Or is the world population so small, that a meteor hits the surface of the earth and ONLY kills several hundred?- Better question yet, what time period is this? If this is the modern or future era, I'm guessing people had time to evacuate and thus only several hundred people died. And therefore "he wasn't one of them" meaning he was one of those who escaped?"Shun Hyun was a fantasy RPG nerd who while playing his favorite game “KPOW”(King's power of war) his life became a literal game of war when his brother gets attached to a certain Game."- First of all, what does this have to do with the red meteor?- Are you writing two different stories?- Several hundred people died, "HE" wasn't one of them, but we don't know who "HE" refers to.- Is Shun Hyun related in any way to the male who did not get killed by the red meteor?- The two paragraphs have no relevance to each other.
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