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I am early on in this book and I am really enjoying it so far! The world design is really interesting and characters Are enjoyable. I am looking forward to seeing how the story progresses!
???I am halfway through the novel and I must say, this book is a gem. the book is so well written, it has the potential to make it big. Five stars because it deserves it. Keep going Author.??
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Hi! I love how you write your story. Keep it up! Thank you for making this story!
Writing Quality: 2/5The writing is bad, maybe try grammarly.It is very dialogue heavy and written like a script. A story needs a good balance or dialogue and descriptions. Update Stability: 5/5I put that for everyone Story Development: 3/5It is not bad, but I wish I could enjoy it. It would be better if there was more descriptions added. Also some stuff was confusing that I had to reread to make sure I didn't miss anything. Character Design: 3/5Your characters are not bad, but once again I wish there was more descriptions to tell me about them. Dialogue does not give the depth of a person's feelings, motives, etc. World Background: 3/5Your story could be a gem, I enjoy what you are making and trying to do, but once again, we come back to descriptions; there needs to be some with paragraphs and not something written like a script. You are on the right road, but maybe research more on writing or get inspired by other books while also using one of the sites that help in grammar. Keep up the good work!
love the book I can't wait to see more chapters I hope you continue this book
At chapter 5, dropped, 3.8 stars from me.Although I can't say anything, I already read enough and this types of novels isn't enough to interest me.So for people, this novel is extremely similar to [ I am a superstar ] The world entertainment industry is extremely lacking behind, thus mc uses his knowledge to create LOL for example or popular novels such as [ Library of heaven's path ]Though with a luck cube of some sort.This must be enough info for y'all to not hate on for posting a review for only reading 5 chapters
..................................................Great work. The Grammer can be improved.plus the story line is interesting.work more on your chapters.