The Primordial Ancient Snake

An interesting opening chapter and I always personally liked cooking in Novels, so I believe I'll enjoy this book? Hope it doesn't make me too hungry while I read?

This story is fun to watch.There are some downsides, like the arrogance of an MC who is not good for anything and depends on the system. But his reverse communication with his dad is really fun to read lol.So overall it's a good story if you ignore the excessive arrogance.

Mc is all over the place. World background is ok but the backstory could be left out and it would still be the same. Mc was given a subordinate system and then spent 4 months doing nothing while his competitors where training their ass’s off and yet he seems to come out on top.Just not my cup of tea when it comes to novels i would prefer a bit more logic.

Currently at chapter 31, the novel seems to be truly good. The school bits are great and even though I would like a bit more interaction between the characters Infully understand why there isn't.The teachers are great. As of right now with teachers such as professor Messen and Pompei just enough information is given to somewhat understand them while still having plenty of mystery and guessing.Thus far the combat is exciting but a true magical duel has yet to happen, lookong at how the story is progressing though it shouldn't be too far off.The pacing is probably the best part of the novelm Even though a bunch of new things keep getting introduced, nothing seems rushed. Everything seems to make sense as well.I hope at some point we will be able to see the Mortal world amd have some info on that front.Great job thus far author

Hi! I love how you write your story. Keep it up! Thank you for making this story!                                                         

Gosh ! Dear Writer - You seem to have gone on a winter break and forgotten us readers. Its been a while since you sent any mass updates. The story was positively building up. Cant just keep sweatting it out with Bali ju. Please progress....