Good book! The start is somewhat plain but it has the perfect elements to hook readers.
Give it a go, readers. The cute demon is a cutie, you'll love it!
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Great story and concepts fOr and interesting world. The definition of an overpowering main character but it is fun Vote for this to get picked
The start of this is filled with cliches that happen because they should in this kind of novel. Clan gives a past genius years and lots of resources to cultivate again. He doesn't so they ignore the clan law that says to kick him out and instead give him a quiet and easy job in the middle of nowhere. In exchange, the MC sees them as a trashy clan and plans to abandon them because...??? They weren't happy that he was taking in all these resources? He knew why the resources the clan provided weren't enough for him to cultivate but didn't bother to tell them and then is angry at them for not just giving him everything because he wanted it. Yea. The MC isn't likeable at all. The plot seems pretty bland too. I'll pass on reading further.
It's a really forced novel and the MC is sometimes really stupid. The author keeps saying how the MC doesn't want trouble yet he does absolutely nothing when the 3 women all go out of their way to cause trouble for him in the most forced way ever, he doesn't even try sometimes and just lets it happen. This is also probably a harem, which completely ruins the novel.
It has some unique(as in CN unique) but that's it.
Okay so... I need to read more but so far it is a very rough story. I'm two chapters in and there are already a ridiculous amount issues. Grammer for one, using male pronouns instead of female and confusing the reader is a big one. There are also already some plot issues I see on the horizon. Honestly, I think that the premise is good but it just needs more work and thought. Could also use someone to go through and help with grammar. I will try to continue and may update the review if there is any improvement in quality, character depth, or flow vs forced plot.
Hi Author, with just a few chapters, I am already impressed of your work. Keep it up! Good storyline and characters... More upload please[img=uplease. .
There are so many grammatical mistakes that i could not read this anymore. I'm sure it would be a great story once it has been properly edited
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Well, so far so good of the reboot, I still like the original more, but that's probably because I enjoyed the 451 chapters of it.
And by the way, there will be no betrayal by close one's in this reboot, right? Because if that's the case I'll just stop reading it right away. I stopped reading ATG because of that
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bad story telling and world building but concept is good I feel bored
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