I Don't read it yet i just hope it can be good and the MC is truly shameless.516173839930330292982151416810101019176151516181010101029373652528392010176e633638292920026553
Writing quality: Acceptable, but could be better.Story development: really random... Feels like author forgets the story and makes up something new to make the story move along. Forgetting part of the story in the progress. Worst of all, I feel the author messed up the cultivating aspect of the story really badly, be it the speed of cultivating or the system behind it (tend to change from time to time)...Character Design: bad, i don't really see much "development" of the characters and they tend to disapear from time to time when not needed. The main character is stupid... and forgets his upgrade ability whenever it looks like a good idea to use it (example: the tyrant material body technique)...World Background: not anything special, not good, not bad.All in all, it is not a good novel in my eyes, but it has potential and i had a good time reading it. The author, in my eyes, have no need to drag out the chapters like he does -.- waaaaay too much useless information that i really did not care about...
Hai! I wanna say that your story is great! Keep up with the good work, author! ? Btw I make a story too and it would be kind of u if u can check it out and give some reviews and stars in there too ? My story : https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14901475106138705
Everything is good except for the lazy translator who only likes milking money from patreon supporters. The lazy etvolare will take 4 MORE YEARS of milking patreon supporters their money before completely translating this novel. 1 chapter a day and sometimes missing to post because of laziness is unacceptable specially for a novel that most people support. If only QI can get this novel completely . . .
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
amazing work keep up the good work (here an idea try adding creating table/workbench so when he upgrades it he can blue futuristic high walls)
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SoU: 5*Translation Quality: 5* - readableStory development: As the sypnosis already told, the mc is reborn as a cultist and has a system that enables him to travel through dimensions/words like the Diablo game.He gets missions and side missions with rewards and penalties.He also three different abilities from his summon but the only one that I saw and can remember is that he can get 'soulstones' that grants him the strength of the 'said character imprinted' on it. For example it's a saitama soulstone then he gets all the strength of saitama.Of course the soulstone only have 5 usages. No time limit I guess until the battle is over.Character design: The mc is a bit bland while the other characters have their own personalities, not rich but the difference is clear.World background: Fantasy world with churches, gods, cultists and balalala.Overall.... 4.2 for me.The 'jumping into other other worlds' that are movies, series and games are a bit too much now. The novel 'Custom made demon king' was better in this aspect as it was really well done by the author, this novel on the other hand is a bit worse.But it's still good, so I say give it a try,
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writing would be average but author likes to fool around.The grammar has many faults, wrong prepositions, common mistakes, typos, use random word when he is mind draws a blank to replace, using copy&pasteThe author did not bother to explain many things, unused skill books, idle system has army building purpose, inefficient system, does not have system store to sell surplus items, confusion.i could name many more things.This gets worse as it progresses
I really like this webnovel, as others Mao Ni's books, is very good. It's need attention because events are connected with each other to former the plot, sometimes the results only appears many chapters after. I'm really hoping the translator to return the work soon.