I really want to love this book but the author spoilt it with too much redundancy and unnecessary plots instead of progressing the story.FL is supposed to be a strong FL but we don’t get to see it because the author strips her of everything but piles up insults and distractions. It is just too frustrating because we waste money to read this books but at the end of the day you end up with nothing.
please look forward to it~~~
This author infodumps for like 60% of the story, and when he’s not he’s wasting chapters on something frivolous. Secondly, the premise was very enjoyable but the execution is way off. There’s zero buildup. Finally, the author had the nerve to refer to black people as literal slaves (that is the exact word the translator used) who fawned over those with yellow skin, and the paleryou were the higher your status. That turned me off completely. I liked it enough to read up to that point despite the many flaws of this author, but the blatant racism is a no go.
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I'm really enjoying this read. I love the flow of the writing and the personal writing dialogue. The character set up and transition into an isekai was really cool. I can tell it's going to be one of my favorite reads keep up the great work.
I am only at the start of the novel (chapter 50ish) but I had a few things bugging me so I wanted to let it out, I would like the author to go into more detail about the spiritual energy density the only thing we are told is that the red valley is a "high" spiritual energy density region and that the black plains practically has nothing this makes it kinda hard to compare to other places and see the difference when Minos uses arrays to increase the density so maybe add a grade for the density of something. The second thing bugging me is character design, i think the only characters that are described are Minos, and his potential females, but the description are very brief and don't actually describe that much but maybe it improves with time, but if not please work on that.
THIS IS SOOO GOOD, I love the way you write, looking like re:monster, a novel that I love, congratulations for such a great novel, I hope you never drop it
Good evening and once again, but no less important: Thank you for the chapter. As for this story, I admit that at first I didn't have high expectations. I thought it would be difficult for a tree to captivate me as much as Yasenia, but I was positively surprised. Liu Shu also has charisma and the chapters are a lot of fun to read. The different ways of thinking between the races and the pink fairies themselves are great attractions in this story and also add a lot of tension to the plot. (Example: As much as the pink fairies want to defend Liu Shu and are willing to die in this effort. They're not as strong as the maids and Tatiana, so I'm much more apprehensive about the tree and the lovely pink fairies than I am about the Dragon. Who, in addition to her own strength and cunning, still has Tatiana, Valeria, Mirror, Maids, Harem... and a whole range of allies). I kind of underestimate that Yasenia will cope with whatever the Heavens throw at her, but Liu Shu won't. Yasenia's ability is a trait developed from her efforts and I really like this hard-working MC that our Dragon is. But I have to admit that Liu Shu's naivety and fragility also have their charms. In short, you're writing two very good stories with immensely different but equally captivating protagonists.-Suzushiro
Good concept, but the golem "crafting" is too simple.
Let's see, a story with greek mythology, check!Good characters, check!Good premise and world also check!Good job, Author you got something good here, the only problem would be a few grammar mistakes here and there (but like I always say it does not ruin or hinder a good story and can be fixed with ease and time) so keep going Author!
I wished their was more interaction with other players(I know there will be some coming soon but right bow its too monotonous) and don‘t focus too much about the real world once the story really started then sure, otherwise keep up the good work?
Its a great comedy.You should write more chapters, while sometimes the story is a litlle weird its that that males this story so fun.__________________________________________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------so im waiting for more chapters