This is an awesome and interesting book with a good premise and great characters. I'm hooked to it I must say and Hope the author continue with the flow.
Read to chapter 40, first 20 chapters seem a little rushed and inexperienced. After that it starts getting better. Quite enjoyable to read as of now.
The best review I have ever seen so had to paste it here XD->Jiang He walks into a Walmart. The managers all greet him respectfully at the entrance, terrified."Lord Jiang He, what may we do for you?""I'm here for compensation." Jiang He pointed to an employee, who has turned white in the face. "All I did was kill his wife and kidnap her sons. Yet she was spying on me and even had killing intent toward me. How dare he? I can't sleep at night because of him, scared that he might murder me at night.""Sir, please have mercy. He is just..." A manager was pleading.Jiang He harrumphed, and a sword Qi at 20 times the speed of sound instantly penetrated that manager's head."Hmmpt! I'm just here to ask for a little compensation. I simply want him dead, and 50 of your stores as compensation for mental stress!" Jiang He felt ridiculous. All he wanted was a bit of compensation. How dare these people be so arrogant.The Walmart could do nothing but agree to his demands. They killed the employee on the spot, and gave Jiang he his rightful compensation.Damn, Jiang He thought. I was hoping they'd argue a bit more. Then I could have asked for more compensation.Jiang He was annoyed as he left the store. Where will he get the 200 spirit meat he wants now?Hmm. That employee has a father who is a big shot in Cosco. He is definitely going to kill me if I don't kill him. I guess I will have to pay a visit to Cosco and destroy that franchise! Hmmpt. How dare he think about killing me. Does he think I'm easy to bully?
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An overall good story ruined by the progressively worsening grammarA very comprehensive story that contains many elements in a story about war + modern elements + supernatural elementsProtagonist has morals, principles, cheats and cunning
Man to be frank ********** was way better than this dumb website "qidian" at least they never forced their readers to unlock chapter by paying 9 spirit stones and if you're broke then our great qidian will force use to buy spirit coins by paying them 10 USD! If this goes on I better stop reading light novel from such a great website and by the way I'm dropping "the strongest system" this novel ain't Worth 10 USD!
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Read this a while ago and decided to reread, only now realizing how much of what I remembered was just nostalgia. It’s not necessarily terrible, but a lot of the plot doesn’t make much sense, the mc is just edgy to the point it hurts, and the authors other novel is (imo) much better in basically every way. Only reason I might see myself attempting to finish this again is because I remember this guy shows up in the other novel.
Positive: - Interesting premise and system Negative: - blind nationalism - Bland characters - Story rushed and poorly grounded in reality One word that describes this novel: disappointment
First of all, I like how you build your characters! They all have personalities that make them unique to each other. The fighting scenes are cool as well and written in a way that makes you imagine the whole thing. Kind of have an issue with the way the paragraphs are spliced but it's cool. It could be worked on.Anyway, great work!
I think it's great. Not too simple, but not too complicated ................................................................................