Op probably meant that the writing or the translation doesn't flow well. I kinda agree with him too, the writing style is very repetitive(not talking about the plot, just grammar and vocabulary usage in general), it isn't the kind that would immerse you and makes you appreciate the book. Futhermore the POV itself is portrayed from first person, which makes the world around harder to illustrate without sufficient information and descriptions thrown towards us. Sometimes, we may have to go another mile and reference from different content from the internet to properly structure what kind of expressions the characters were making due to the writing style and the lack of information it provides.
I'm using my master's computer while he's out ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ don't tell him tho
and what does this supporter tag means under ur name
so i have finish the novel yesterday. the only thing that i regret is why im not reading its early while i already save it in library for quite sometime already ??
i totally recommend it guys. its a fluffy story with no angst. the type that can make you rolling in the bed while punching the bedding.
and also the summary.. i can tell half of its is true but the other half is not really right. don't get sway by the summary guys. its not give justice to this wonderful story
Leave it to toika to have novels I can read without feeling forced to carry on.
Nothing much
might try this out. the description makes me anticipate lots of face slapping :)
JUST READ IT AND PERSIST
why is there a f*ck*ng masturbation and netorare tag? i have literally been trying to not come across these since im gonna jerk myself off to death if it goes like this... so like, is this story worth my time? can somebody spoil me a little and tell me its elements?
also, did this guy get ntr'd? im not reading this no matter what kind of plot you give me if thats the case
PLEASE XIIN.PLEASE UPDATE.I;M TRYING MY BEST FOR WAITING THE NEW CHAPTERS.SO,PLEASE XIIN PLEASE UPDATE.I HAD READ THIS NOVEL FOR THE FIFTH TIME.PLEASE PLEAASSSSEE UPDATE.I'M BEGGING YOU!!!!
The mc is 18 how is it pedophilia?
when I first started reading web novels it was bearable but after a while its just…really terrible ?
I’ve seen the author roasting people as well and it’s just really childish lmao I can tell why he writes stories like this