Eh.. I guess the story is nice? This is the author’s first time writing, I guess. There are a lot of beginner mistakes but he seems to want to improve and learn so I think people should give him a try and help whenever they can. One meaningful comment can help. But, since I know how people are here, I doubt I’ll see a lot of that. It will probably be hate and condemnation. But, at least some people who like this novel will try and help the author. I wish him luck. I didn’t read a lot so this could be counted as a spam review since I didn’t say anything meaningful.
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great book I would say it's a must read because it's just that good the author also seems to like to respond to your comments so I give this a 30 out of 20
The story is good and i like how the prince is arrogant but you should make it so stronger peoplefight him and one defeat him so he have a motive in life.
SO GREAT IT IS THE BEGINNING OF A LEGEND. THE START OF GLORY THAT WILL NEVER FADE. THE STORY BEHIND THE BATTLE GOD YE XIU AND HIS AUTUMN LEAF.
I have read this till chapter 24 and have quite liked the way this story is developing and can see it's potential. Character till now is neither all powerfull nor has a cheat system till now atleast. Although I understand this is still early however I hope atleast few of the below thing could be made somewhat more clear
1. World background - we only know that his kingdom is at war with an alliance. Since the mc is still young he might not need to know but still a background would give more context and what mc is acutally being prepared for.
2. side character - apart from their you still get to know quite less abt their personality or background
3. Martial system - still not clear with the levels and type
I don't know if this is yours or just copy paste from others... But one thing I can say confidently is that I want more chapter!!!! Not the first zombie harem master fanfic I had read, but definitely one of the best(And I mean all of it..)....
It seems to be going well so far, an interesting yet also confusing plot. The setting doesn't make sense to me, schools attacking each other in a clan war is unique but strange as well. I'm sure more will be explained in future chapters
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Starting was super,it made me to read upto current chapter last night, i would like to read more chapters, please post more chapters,you have my full support ???
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The last chapter put my heart in my hand, I was fond of the characters although I have to say that some of them really dislike me, but the hell they are made so that they don't enlarge you at first, until now