ArchProgenitorUA0
The book was quite appealing. Combining rebirth and Video game in a unique and pleasant way made it quite enjoyable. But I kinda wonder, a guy with eidetic memory and was average Joe..??u200d♀️??u200d♀️ That's the first... Maybe that what makes this book intriguing... Loves to read more.
Anyone know the raw .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... ..........
EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
I was very respectful and careful in my assessment of your story. I had only gotten to either 18 or 20 some chapters in your story before I decided that it was not my cup of tea. the world background was very detailed and contained a lot of explanation which I enjoyed. as for the updating stability I cannot accurately give a rating as I have not personally received an update; for I have only started reading the story recently. your character design is very in-depth, although I did not really get to experience that much of the character I really enjoyed the story. for the story development I gave the highest rating possible for the length of time that I read your story. the writing quality leaves a little bit to be desired as I can easily tell that English is not your first language, or it is your first language and you're just having trouble like me in using grammar. either way it was very entertaining and I looked forward to more stories from you.
I don't know how this isn't super popular, the writing quality is good, the events follow the anime, but are changed, Saitama has hair and there is an interesting mystery element with Fubuki,
Too many Fang Yuan nowadays. Though good novel.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
In this novel, for those wondering the smartphone has got barely any mention and is a magical treasure used to copy cultivation methods. It is a great novel and I hope this gets voted and gets selected. Until now it doesn't make the protagonist invincible or grant any special powers. Really good writing and this is the most realistic form of cultivation in a really long time. Please voTE!!!
something tells me this is going to be epic, yo author when are releasing this awesome novel? please I really honestly want to read this cause it's eating me up
This novel is simply terrible. Plot holes are everywhere, MC is dull, and every character is arrogant. Don’t waste your time here. It isn’t worth it.
I just wish it has more chapters. The author promised to update more if he win, so I really wish he win this. So far, his other work has a stable update so the author can probably live up to his promise.
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]
