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I really enjoyed the story and the concept of it it's like a whole bunch of anime i like mixed together the world is like the anime magi where they can explore and conquer dungeons for magical weapons and the mc is raised away from humans so he has that goku innocence that i love i really recommend it the only think i kinda didnt like is the power system but other than that everything else is perfect
The story progression is good. Give it a try. I think most of the fantasy lovers will like the way it progresses.
man, the first one got me depress and also i feel like theres a meaning to matias's story it's really interesting really i do love it, hope to get more updates soon
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Hooked after reading chapter 2. It's well written and I love the Idea of the story. From reading the latest chapter compared to the second one, though both of them are great, it's clear the author has improved the writing style even more. So far I also like all of the girls and hope the MC is successful in obtaining their hearts.
I hope there can continue the story, I look forward to the continuation of the story, the story is interesting background MCs and their families make me curious, the world outside the village is waiting
honestly I don't even know what to say about this story it was most definitely the best story I've ever read had plot twists that I never could have even imagined and so much more the ending was truly unexpected to me and honestly it was the best possible ending there could have been I loved how it all closed together honestly I hope the author continues his writing because thus far I have to say the absolute best writer I have ever read from if there was a possibility to give more stars to the story I would because it was absolutely amazing. p.s I recommend you read the entire story even the parts where it gets slow and parts where you don't want to because once you make it to the end it'll be worth it
Storys pretty awesome and interesting....
suggestion: dont make this a cliche type BS story where MC starts building his own faction..make him like a unique loner type MC..with him only turning his lovers into vampires....maybe add world travel and if you are doing romance dont make it stupid and slutty but a proper romantic development...and if harem max 3-5....also an OP MC ..keep him like that like i mean just physically you can see that this can easily kill every character in HP....
Anyway these are just suggestions..you do you..good luck and good show.
A perfect blend of Fantasy with the game elements and mystery. Quite intimidating and Interesting. I would recommend everyone give a try and read upto 3 Chapters and I can assure you won't regret it
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i dont give reviews normally, but this book is great. its one of the better ones of the "useless hero gets abandoned/thrown out/betrayed" genre. the story isnt going too fast, but also not too slow. all in all a great read.