Writting quality:
the quality of writting is very catchy and intresting and will keep you intact with the story
Story Development:
Story development can not be grasp by 1st 5 chapters, but one thing is clear that author knows how to do his work. and sometimes it's part of story to keep the suspense for later time.
Character Design:
Characters are unique, especially Amon and Valerio. the rest needs a little bit more of honing before we can make judgment.
Updating Stability:
it's good but not the best.
World Background:
The world background is very intresting, author has made multiple types of beings and power ranking divided very professionally.
most everything was average and cliche. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing, so long as the characters are well developed and the writing skillful.
Unfortunately, both the characters are writing quality are bad. The writing quality was mildly irritating, with the bad Grammer and exposition being handled very poorly.
The characters were by far the worst part of this book, and the reason I dropped it. The characters didn't feel one but like people; rather, they were one dimensional and seemed to lack any complexity or realism.
For example, the all men except for MC are villains, irresponsible, or lusty pigs. One girl (at the beginning) was the vain, big breasted onee-chan that instantly falls for the main character when he saves her. MC is a do gooder with a shop. He failed to be interesting, at least to me.
I was looking for a yandere love for months
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Very interesting concept and writing style. The author uses a red dragon as a love interest and it is a unique take on romance which is worth a read. Keep writing, and keep posting!
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What a nice story! I cannot wait for the author to update the novel.
hi author I hope you read this
What a little gem I found. why is this story not on the highest rankings is beyond me. the writing and the flow are excellent, even if the story is moving a little too slow (not a criticism, I'm simply greedy for more haha). Keep it up, love your work.
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Love the plot? although I was a bit confused while reading the first few chapters. The story is amazing, one of the best gaming stories I've read.Good work author??