Eclipsed Necromancer: From Mortal to Undying Monarch

All i can say is this novel is too good, too awesome, and i cant vote since im only level 1? but i hope more people will read this. Thanks boss author for ur cool novel, i hope my review will get u motivated to update lmao. We reader want MORE MORE MORE HAHHAHA i want more Merry Christmas HAHHAHA and this is all i can review, my first i think.

This is better then I expected. The only thing I can’t get over is how the Author keeps time skipping and summarizing the situation into a single paragraph. The Author could have easily made us emotionally invested. But instead, too many info jumps! Author needs to learn 'show not tell'.It is uncertain if MC is smart or not. Only time will tell if this is good.But honestly, though I hate to say it, this might be better then EER in terms of plot and organization. Though I think EER is better in terms of beginning. Romance?: I won’t spoil names but I love her. However, I dislike how MC “crush” is mentioned often as it feels forced. A character with no significance in the story and isn't even aware of his existence. Yet MC can’t forget about her all these years. He didn’t even remember her name after a decade, so wtf? It was 'deep love' for just a small crush and you’d think his mindset would change after all these years.It’s to soon to judge as we don’t know what path MC will take once he enters society. Hopefully, it’ll be like One-Punch Man.

The story progression is good. Give it a try. I think most of the fantasy lovers will like the way it progresses.                                                      

Honestly, this is a great book, to begin with, I don't think I can imagine the pain Arylan is facing with memory loss and the only family you have not telling you about the past.Author, you're great at writing, this is a beautiful book and I want you to keep it going. Cheers

Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. Still early but I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.

everything is forced literally everything