⚠️Spoilers⚠️:Two chapters in and there is already a massive plot hole. See, Merlin was one of the strongest figures in their world's history and his class was also the same as the MC's; an SSS-Class - Reader. But somehow, the very same teacher who used to brag about Merlin's achievements didn't recognize the MC's class even when Merlin's autobiography was available at the library. There is also the problem of the slightly less powerful, ice cold, and focused heroine. The side characters are two dimensional and didn't have proper development and they were used as items to drive the plot. In terms of the grammar, I didn't notice any big error but it was still a bit of a struggle to not focus on the minor errors.
This makes me happy. finally a invincible fam fic
This is another bangaaa... Well this another soft work
Writing quality: 5/5: I don't have any reason for this 5/5 because it just what this work worth...
Updating stability: 4/5: well still kinda stable...
Story development: 5/5: this novel is so intriguing that u won't just wanna stop, from on suspense to the other...
Character design: 5/5: well all characters in this work not bad...
World background: 5/5: well if earth is not rated 5/5 no fictional word deserve it....
Overall summary: the book leans closer to China hidden cultivators appearing in the secular world, so just read....
Strongest from this site? I don't know the strongest Mc's on this site but I have some op Konrad the MC of infinite mana the Mc's of universal systems so being the strongest on the site is almost impossible
This book is a hidden gem. The plot, pacing, characters are all rich. Their desires are showcased with all the emotions from the good and bad. This novel is very well written. I need more!
Seems interesting enough to give it a try. Seems interesting enough to give it a try. Seems interesting enough to give it a try. Seems interesting enough to give it a try. Seems interesting enough to give it a try. Seems interesting enough to give it a try.
already read it like 22 chapter, is not rip off of RI, and thanks god it also not fan fiction. the power system in this novel little bit confusing, its like retard combination of generic cultivation novel with RI power system. and the cheat is not full automatic retard update, but still need some ingridient to enchant the gu.
My fellow people, I’ve come with glad tidings from the land of the Raws. At the risk of losing many brain cells and constant headaches from sh*tty translations I’ve come before you with a review.
It’s a decent novel, not the best one you could find but it’s a good filler much better than a lot of novels you’ll find on here with a somewhat interesting ending. Honestly though if you get through the first 20-30 chapters and you still don’t like it then I doubt you’ll enjoy the rest but do give it a good try
I’ll be embarking on another journey to the Raws, if you dont hear from me make sure you bury my pc deep in the earth
love it...love it...love it soooo much
not many genre like this one, it is great to follow the upgrading ability that MC has. more please author, thank you so much.
Ps la historia se ve interesante, Pero los capítulos son muy cortos. Se que es difícil escribir una historia buena pero deberías hacerla un poco más larga
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so far the story is good, simple, and unique. I keep thinking female protagonist ability just like someone from My Hero Academia.
A system novel but the system dosent stand out too much. Most system novel start with stats it feels fine in the begining but it starts to hurt sometime later as there are some ridiculous stats which does not make sense and annoying ~+ skills that blinded your eyes , im glad that the system was like this and i also like the mc character it fells more 'modern' not like some hurt m*****f**r which goes to somewhere and takes the beat out of everything if you know what i mean.. no thrill in that man