really good story and please author continue
Although there is only one value written after the end of each story, we can extract more values from a single story.
keep going and never give up my dear
Alibaba version of Chaos Heir.
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: You should have updated people of the possibility of hiatus sooner, then once you saw that you were not likely to come back to this story, sill let them know(this is the thing you did let us know, but you should have told us both). Your story development seems a little lacking, I don't know where to suggest improvements though... I just sensed that you didn't really have a full understanding of what you were writing while I was reading your work, and the part that took the hit was your story developement.
Positive Feedback: The character design of the MC is well done, and I can already see some other characters being developed within the first 5 chapters.;,;. good job.;,;. also, I saw that you were clear and defined on the world background and I could tell that you tried hard at making sure the writing quality was good.;,;.
Personal Feedback: the overall quality is not what drives me away from this novel in the least, it is two fold... I don't like going past chapter 5 in any novel I can't finish, and I'm not really interested in this story.;,;. Keep up the good work (I hope you come back and finish this novel at some point.;,;.).
Score: WQ 5/5 SoU 3/5 SD 4/5 CD 5/5 WB 5/5
hey guy, here is images of our main characters, I hope you guys will like it these are images of there childhood i will also update there matures form images but when story has progressed till some point /**** Please leave a review about your experience in review or comment section : D *****/KOMI
please oh please don't drop this. I don't think I have red anything this week read that is free in a long time. I would even pay for it
I don’t know if this was intentional but synopsis is very misleading.If you are expecting a story where the mc owns a card store and his power is to use the cards he made to affect reality, you are dearly mistaken.Apparently, the shop isn’t even his. In order to gain new cards, cards that HE made, he needs purchase them from the shop owner. It also seems like other people can enter and purchase these cards considering how accessible the shop is. The mc’s power of card actualization doesn’t even feel like his own power. It seems like something the keeper granted to him seeing as he has to not only go to the shop but stay in it to open cards and actualize them.To be honest I’m just disappointed on what I expected not being what I actually got. I’m not the only one who feels this way, so I think a good idea for the author is to change synopsis to make it clearer on what to expect from the story.
Another good one to read added to my favorites. Thank you.
Writing this review cus the first volume just ended!
The book has been off and on for about a year and a half(ish), but the quality of the book itself is absolutely amazing and the world and characters are all great as well, with all of them having unique and interesting backstories. So um, ya.
Overall good ****. hope the author keeps up with this release rate tho.
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