i personally haven't read it yet so i will leave an update later, i am only posting a review now because i will probably forget to later........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
ignore me i am just here enjoying the novel ?
Excellent story so far. I love the inclusion of polygamy into the story as I am so tired of seeing a harem where the MC doesn’t actually marry any of the women. So thank you so much for including actual wives for the MC in your story. Keep up the great work. Can’t wait to read more.
"SIGH"... Another Garbage ..nothing clear . no character .. no background ... fast based ... no clear power levels ..
One of the best novels I've ever read, with a good background as well as good character development....so far so good, so keep up the good work?????
What I want to know is why all of the top reviews are of people... WHO NEVER READ THE BOOK! Give some proper reviews and stop with the oh i like the author and the cover so that's 5 freaking stars. Stop misleading people! I've had enough of those little spammers. You better cut that s**t out.
I like this one very much! Spirit Cultivation was amazing and this one is definitely good too.There are only two things i ask of the author: 1- Update this novel more often! 2- Please focus on the girls that came from the other novel. They are already incredible and i wish we could see more of them instead of adding new harem members. Each new girl you add is less time spent on the ones that already have a great story and relationship with the MC.Thanks for the novel!
its the best for you to be able to make a good decision on what you're going to start reading and i believe that this is a good story if you now that this is your type of book
The book is now over... It has been an amazing journey alongside Mr.Fang, Nalan, Smirking Emoji Face, Xiaolev, and everyone... Damn I'll miss you Mr.Fang. This was the greatest of novels I've ever read in my entire life so far, with great character depth, interesting story plot, and realistic power progression it is a masterpiece. I used to look forward every week as I'd stop myself from reading for a week then binge read the chapters all at once in a long cycle over and over again. Eventually I found other novel to distract me and I'd come back every month and so! And then eventually I didn't come back for over 5 months... Now when I'm back it is all over! Imagine my surprise when I saw there was an ending instead of a new realm or world or something that other authors use to drag out their novels. I feel the author wanted to give this book the ending it deserved, even if we wanted it to go on, as it had done well, Leaf had done well in this. I'm thankful for the feelings and knowledge and entertainment given to.me by Leaf and Quidan and Webnovel and hope for a follow up novel in the future of Mr.Fang's travels throughout the world. In the end all I can say is...Goodbye! Goodbye Mr.Fang! We will miss you and will always love you! So go and travel as we wait here for Leaf to tell us your stories and adventures! We love you so don't you damn think we'll forget you and don't you damn think we won't pester Mr.Leaf for more of you every day! Goodbye for now and may we see each other once again!
A pretty decent read that you can pick up to get yourself into a decent mood. Though the characters can have you questioning logic at times it feels like the author has put a decent amount of effort and experiences into this novel.Translation Quality: Decent translation quality. The only thing that I could really complain about would be the way the different character thoughts are written down. Writing them in italics or single quotation marks would be easier to read when differentiating between speech and thoughts. Stability of Updates: Not much to say here, if the story gets picked then I'll get back to it.Story Development: A decent development in a real life setting. Most of the story seems to revolve around school and casual life events.Character design: The initial character of the MC comes across as relatively intelligent, if a bit dense. However, it can get confusing at times because sometimes he comes across as aware of situations, whereas others he can come up with completely illogical thought processes. It feels like the author is trying to write the characters from a sorta anime style, whereby characters are supposed to be larger than life, however it sometimes misses the mark and comes across as strange.World Background: I guess this part is fine with the main part of the story in an educational setting. However, in later chapters there is some exploration with places outside the homes and school which comes across fine.
It has a story to be told and one that a reader would be interested in. However I think the simulation process some of it could be skipped to a stage that is new.
This is a story I HAD to review. It was like part of me (a very big part) decided it was happening and when the lazy me started considering just putting it off until I eventually forgetting to write one (happens a lot) the first part pulled a figurative gun out and held the lazy part of my at figurative gunpoint to actually write a proper review.So let me first mention how I binge read this novel hard. I literally put all other novels on hold for 2 days and even had to force myself just go get my daily free SS from webnovel check in etc.The author does an amazing job describing scenes and stories. This honestly felt like I was drawn into on of my favourite tv shows or anime with how I just imagined everything in my head more than I felt I was actually reading, everything flows so well together it's as smooth as a dream would be. The storyline is so well thought out, the world building is thorough but not too much and the author doesn't dump info on you, it's like every couple chapters there's a line or a few where it feels like setting the scene for just that part of the story but each time it's like a puzzle piece building up the world gradually until you suddenly realise how much worldbuilding has been going on without you thinking about it. It sounds like there's a lot of world guiding going on but actually there's not much. Enough to tell you what you need and want to know, nothing more or less. Exactly what you need without giving you too much to think about or not enough to understand the world.Character development is so incredibly realistic and full of just pure raw emotions and some illogical moments that just make sense when thinking from the heart while others fit perfectly when thinking logically. The author just knows exactly how to mix the two perfectly and blend them together. At time focusing on one, then the other and sometimes switching between them quickly in relatable and amazingly way where it just flows and fits and makes so much sense for it to do so while drawing you into the story and the feelings and perspectives of the characters.I have almost 0 issues with the writing quality. I think maybe a rare mistake here or there but I was too drawn into the story and focused my mind just corrected anything wrong subconsciously so I could keep reading without pause just to keep enjoying the amazing read that this novel provides.When it comes so some worries some people (probably heterosexual guys like me) about possible male on male action then I can say as long as you aren't homophobic then you have nothing to worry about. It's not off putting in the least and worse case the author puts ample warning that allows you to skip anything you might be sensitive on.A couple things to say to the author! Firstly the parts of some "Creators thoughts" at the end of a few chapters where you apologised for possible filler. I CAN'T SEE ANY FILLER! To me a filler is anything that does not progress the story and just increases word count. This novel however is done so beautifully where everything has a purpose. Either giving information or an opinion/perspective a character that heels progress the plot or explains emotions and why characters act the way they do, it's done perfectly and to even consider these chapters being given that label of "Filler" is not giving the novel (and especially the author) nearly enough credit.Something an author once told me when I asked for writing tips was to reduce wasted words. If it doesn't need to be there and doesn't progress the story then delete it. I have yet to find a single wasted word in this novel and I doubt I ever will see a wasted word from this author as long as they continue to have the same passion for writing as they have now.Lastly I would like to say that this has got be one of my favourite novels yet and I cant wait for more chapters. Even if you aren't sure I ask you just sit down and read this novel for an hour. You won't regret it.