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I think the story is somewhat very not bad
So far it's been a great read. I'm very intrested to see where you take this.
very good.................................................................................................................................................................
I Don't know why but just synopsis makes me to stay away from this novel....????
Keep it up author weldone??????????? sarangayor ?????????????????????????????????
I really like it. The author writes really good, and it is nice to see a world where all sexual preferences are treated equally. It is a refreshing change from real life. Thank you author. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
well performance of the story line in english translation
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A simplistic read.A good one to enjoy passing ur time hand some common elements from different books.??????????????????????????????
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As of now, the story is well written from a grammatical point of view. But we have 30 chapters in which we see an exponential development of harem and not the business empire. And here I have a question, his women can leave their previous husbands because they are not satisfied, then with the increasing numbers in the harem, how many women will remain at the end? Because if the protagonist doesn't have control over time itself, it is impossible to physically satisfy all his women with the rate of expansion of one new woman every 3 chapter. Besides, the title of this work is "Merchant Emperor
