Hey. Just want to say this novel is good, but it can also be better. Just minor editing (well English is not your first language). But the plot is good, kinda realistic, but a little repetitive, some plots just pop like the Author did not really think about it but just made those plots for the past chapters. Ex. When Maiden 1 went to the hospital it says she can't peel the apples cuz she has maids for those work. Then in the next chapters it says Function 1 of shop 'Foods' has been unlocked, and it stated because he conquered maiden 1, and the maiden will have corresponding talents to the function so she has a talent for cooking (he said "so thats why shes good at cooking". See what I mean? Another thing is that a chapter came out of nowhere stating he is emotionless killing machine, gaining the title "emperor". That is really contradicting from what I read.Anyways, overall good Novel, its a gem! I'll still read it! Sincerely yours, SovereignContrast
It's a good story and good character development.And please don't bring religion into this novel, you can just write it without mentioning their religion. So far I like this novel
great story so far . constantly updated. the character development, pacing, and world building are 2nd to none . and it's surprisingly funny
This novel is quite good but still need improvement.There is the writing skill and other matters that need improvement for the sake of the story. Beside, there's still a long journey for the success of the novel.
It is a parody of the encounter between the original characters of One Piece and the characters of a FanFic, watching the adventures of the last one ... The only evaluations that I think of voting, are quality and stability, and the two are well balanced, considering that there are to wait for the original releases and the fanfic ...
Meh. I was liking it from the start and even read further in the raws to give it a chance, but I kept being more and more dissapointed. The story just goes from one place to another without reason, his system doesn't really make sense or fit, but that's not the worse part. Time and time again, the MC will just pull the most ridiculous BS out of his arse to rationalize his future knowledge or system. He'll disappear for years when timetravelling into parallel timelines or tell random thugs that Onyxia is the big bad or that the king was split in two. The other characters are all like, "Woah? Really? That's hard to believe, how did you figure that out?" Then the MC will tell them it's a secret, then all is well. This asspull doesn't happen once or twice, but practically every time he travels to a new zone to... Do stuff? As starved as I am for good WoW fics, this one just let me down over and over again. It's unplanned and stale.
Love for the story is all I feel it can be interact,evasive,alluring and keep you hooked I started and finished all that was released in a day a DAY that was how hard I fell for this nugget of diamond i found buried under the pretence of a bright future but I'm here to tell you it is worth reading now. Short and sweet
My friend, I am here to tell You a story the story of "The Eros God System – Saving the World and Defeating the Demonesses by Busting My Nut, One At a Time.".Once upon a time a good book with intresting caractere,good writing and a good story sadly it didn't last. the hordes of advertisement and fake chapter started, after that the legendary shorter chapter and story degradation began on the 34 chapters 22 had story the rest was advertisement and we as the readers had to withstand that, our tears of sorrow became blood and this blood filld our sallow grave. This was the story of a good book, killed by The Crow of Guilt.But My Friend it's not the end of the story because The Crow of Guilt returnd and upon realising his failure he decided to erase his book sadly now nobody can read The Original, Full of Fake chapters and Fake updates."So what did the Crow do this time?" You say. Hahaha he made a new book, ho.... i mean a "new old" book, Maybe you did not see it because it's no longer available only people who were there at the time of the old war know about it.You see the "new old" is exactly the same book every letter is the same and The Crow only realised 9 chapters(and an extra with only that in it "阿斯顿啊u") and again our hearts were full of sorrow, but in the deepest part there was something else a powerful feeling that tear one's heart apart this feeling was hatred. we the people who supported The Crow and loved him started to feel loathing and hatred toward The bird who bring sorrow. And so this "new old" book only received one review by Gabriella and it was full of anger.now let's talk about what we have before our eyes the "new" book you who has not been part of the war maybe indifferent but you shall not be fool by The Crow of Guilt, He the one how bring sorrow will break your heart and mind i've warned you be careful. the "new" book is the same story but the MC Alex has a new name and he did not "slip down of an escalator" the rest of the story 95% is the same.A year we had a year of peace and the Crow dug out the war axe we who fought in the war are tired we no longer can fight we...we. we are weak.And here we are look a "new" chapter who look a lot like the "old" almost like the crow just change some word here and there to hide the truth.and after only 21 chapters you need to pay to read that mean the chapter 22" 34 Threesome (1)" is an "old" chapter so now you need to pay to read a chapter you've already read a year ago. I...i no longer have the force................... i think it is the end of the story.....excuse me i would like to be alone till my last moment.my friends i'm sorry if i am late,now is time i join youGoodbye World.
There are allot of problems in this novel. Feels like wasted potential.First of the MC is stupid like almost brain dead when the author wants to make him out to be a genius. When in reality he is fucking retarded.He also gets walked over for the first 60+ chapters. The female "guardian" like the girl who is running the prison ****es him over a few times yet mc lets it go like noting happened.... Like totally forgotten not mentioned again. Lets not forget she helped in his execution, did not help him, beaten him half to death a few times, ****ed him over a few more times,....And MC lets it go like noting happened....For some reason mc asks her to join his "team" later. Are we supposed to forget all the shit she did to him?MC also acts arrogant for no reason when he is still a slave. Thinks he acts smug when he is still making money for the guy who killed him and acts all high and mighty for no reason.A few more problems are that the author makes allot of mistakes, and likes to keep the mc weak.MC levels up but author casually forgets about it and then lets mc level it up again and thus waste exp.And one of the biggest brain farts about this is when he finally uses his exp after not using it for no reason (to make the mc even more weak then he already is) he puts all his exp in like the slave "class" and then removes the class 30 minutes later (legit next chapter). So the author is just keeping mc weak for no reason and its really annoying at this point. Like imagine watching mc grind (even thou he is already stacking a shit ton exp but does not use it because "reasons") and then your reward is watching him basically delete the exp. And then he acts all high and mighty thinking he is a genius....Author also can't remember his Tiers, like T1 <25 / T2 25-50 / T3 ... Then he ****ed it up the next time becouse he can't remember what he said the previous chapter.Also the later chapters are full of useless system text stuff just to run up word count.Chapters are also really short, there is like no substance in the chapters except useless system info. For example mc walking then rest of the chapter is his stills that author never uses because he thinks it will be to confusing for him to remember....Also the R18 tag is a ?The only thing we got is that the guy who killed mc slept with the guardian (well that's in plied at least).All in all i'm super disapointed. I expected a badass MC but what we got is a whimp who gets walked all over and does not take revenge.I still can't belive he put all his exp in slave that he saved from like 25 chapters and then removes the class.Like i think this novel will turn out in a shitty hero saves the world kind of garbadge.Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates ⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐⭐Like MC is way to softhearted for this kind of novel I expected some dark stuff but mc can't even take revenge now so idk what it will turn out to be later in the novel. Also I think I read somewhere author does not want mc to be the owner of slaves??? LIke he can't be the reason for slaves? Are you for real what kind of garbage shit is that! Novel is full of slaves but mc can't own any? It should be one of his skills yet he can't be the reason for slaves .......Also the dark classes are supposed to be feared yet everyone and there Nan shits on mc. Its like author just forgot about the perks.I feel like there is no progression. MC should be a dark necromancer yet he kills no1 and only has "monsters" under his control why no humans?Also the caps are hard to read.
who doesn't love sim based novels?????????? so many awesome twists and turns take place in the most interesting ways possible????
Ok. Ch: 30 and it's really an enjoyable read so far. The character development was a little abrupt at the beginning but author managed to smooth things out. Keep going. Nice book.
So far I really love the book and the main character. The only critique I have is the main characters and the minions level ups. The MC’s level ups seam a bit force like when they happen I would prefer them to happen mid doing something. And he look at it later rather than like when he wakes up or something. But I can live with it. Overall a really good book I really hope it can make it to well over a thousand chapters.