It's been going well till now, the mc is ruthless by human standards but his attitude to murdering or cleaning bodies up is normal to the demon realm... i forgot the realm's name but anyway he has also shown to be considerate and who knows(excluding nana)he might try to understand mortal feelings and stuff. Can't say much about the stability since it has only started. For me, the writing is quality is great.PS: the best thing about this novel is that Barry(the alternative version of Larry from tis in the novel)is gonna have a girlfriend and no it's not a body pillow, he is actually gonna get a real girlfriend. Well jokes aside, bye.
Beautiful! splendidly beautiful! story has great progression with the necessary elements, a proper balance in character design and great dialogue. With proper update stability, all points scored! ??nice work author
Hello, I did that author noshame thing,I give 5 stars because I love my own story, and I hype with my own story. Here is what you will get from this story: -Character development-Kids MC that strong and smart-Romance-Medieval era setting-Quite complicated power system-Action with sword and magic-Moral ValueAnd here is what you SHOULD NOT expect from this story-Good grammar (For people who are very biased with grammar, you can skip it, this is my first novel, and English is not my first language. You can judge my English just by reading this review, I merely bad at punctuation and poor choice of words. Cnc is welcome, I want to improve, and I will)-Harem (Maybe multiple girl will have love interests toward MC, but this is NOT harem)-Lemon (this story is 18+ because of its violence and gore)
No hate to you dear translator but this would be the first novel where i see an immortal emperor afraid of nuclear weapons. An immortal emperor is way above galaxy power scale and here the fairy's expression turns solemn. Even a nascent soul can decimate these weapons . And does she not have a space ring to store her treasures so that she can recover. Ah so frustrating
After years of study on literature and novels in general, I have finally had a revelation. Cultivation novels are retard magnets that try to forcefully make the reader feel smarter. I have read so many comments, in cultivation novels specifically, that make me want to bash my head into a wall that I can no longer not say this.
Wait a minute
What if I'm mistaken? You see, most cultivation novels have a certain tag next to it: Harem. That's it! Harem novels are the true retard magnets! That's why ever fanfic harem novel I've ever read has made me want to puke my guts out! I can see clearly now!
I don't know if this novel is contracted with the original work from the comic version or just some guys found the original novel version and translated it, but you guys can check the novel version, it's great.
Full support. Please more author. More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!
I don't even know how to start, this book begins like every other book, a seemingly normal video game alternate reality life.
But then the author takes it a step further and makes this alternate reality *reality* and this is where things start happening, its is like the unvailing of a mystery slowly showing its true colours (I can't think of a better analogy for this); suddenly this book is not so simple or normal anymore, its no longer like every other book as everything begins to revolve around a single entity *FATE*
Unfortunately the book is still in the hatching stage and only a few cracks have appeared on its shell but this is a book worthy of reading, probably worthy of being best seller if that concept exists in web novel.
The character's are well developed and have the depth of actual living human beings.
The plot setting is also well made with no holes detected yet (although I'm not a professional so I may be wrong)
The writing style is neat and easy to understand, no unaccounted names flying around
I would even suggest this book go premuim if I wasn't so poor and don't want to give it up anytime soon(quite selfish of me
I'll say, this novel does contain some potential only if the author tries to bring it towards a better result. The author needs to focus more on learning about the genre, and then write more. (Note: If the author is from Nepal, please join https://discord.gg/Xd7maf
Before I say my thought these are genre's that I think the author should add: Action, Adventure, Sword and magic, Guilds, Wars, Pets, Monsters, Game Elements, Evolution, Elves, Dwarves, Sci-fi, hidden gem and Hard-working protaganist. I Feel like more people will see and give this novel a chance with those tags attached to it. As I make this review I am currently at chapter 404 and this novel is amazing. This is one of the best novels I've read so far and I've lost count of how many I've read over the years (no I ain't old).Great main character, solid background in martial arts and combat in general; doesn't feel like Joshua's OP for no reason. The reasons why he's so strong is given to you straight up in a convincing and VERY realistic manner. All important fights are hard fought and never feel like an easy win from the get go. The way he interacts with other characters actually feels like he's talking to people and not subordinates or irrelevant extras that are there just to praise him.Amazing side characters, there has not been a single time where I felt like Joshua's friends, family or even (to my suprise) his first group of guild members have been a waste of space. They all play important roles and they always have a role, always being brought back into relevance. You really don't see that often in novels and I love it in this one.The world building in this novel is solid, as of right now you won't get any complaints out of me. I also look forward to how Joshua's guild interacts with the World Government guild and the other guilds around the world.TOP TIER NOVEL SO FAR!! KEEP IT UP!!!
This book is really well written and the story is awesome! Love the characters! Overall would recommend to anyone. Only problem is the author has seemed to stop updating all together not sure when the author will be back it’s a bummer.
Author-san I loved your first work and I will ask something about this novel. Will there be a romance in it? Good work keep it up author ??