The story concept is good. Some chapters switch to a completely different novel in the middle of a chapter. Most of the chapters writing are a little hard to read but not to bad some editing can fix; however one chapter at least was extremely hard to read I would say machine translation but I've read some machine translated novels that were easier to read then that one chapter (chapter 117), most chapters are not bad and the story is interesting so I have stuck with it for that long but not sure if I will any longer.
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The concept is soemwhat interesting but there are some major flaws. First is the translation is garbage, one of the maids is constantly refered to as “HE”. The numbers for the system arent consisten. The rank of the MC keep changing randomly. The maids are nice but they are super OP so there is no suspense.
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less gooo, just wanted to say the book cover is of hanekawa from monogatari :^ shes a great character, I reccomend watching it or reading it
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this novel is interesting i liked it, i hope that in this novel there is no romance. KAKAKAKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKA
ok let's get this straight at first I was hype but then I read the story all that hype came crashing down I've read 12 chaps but from what I can see it's not what author said mans was RUTHLESS and now he gives af about a sickly sister I don't understand you said he always thinks rationally so if he used his brain he would know that he gets nothing from saving that child I understand you want character development but you should have never gave him Avis emotion thats a turn off for me
I thought the main character was an honorable guy but he's an emotional child. He even had someone sexually assaulted because they said his girlfriend might be cheating.
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This book isn't for everyone. Anyone that expects the standard zero to hero in 7 chapters book won't get their fix. However, it's hilarious, dark, and has extremely clever dialogue / character development. I've binged what there is and I'm excited for more chapters