The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and it’s cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters
Hmmmm the synopsis says parentless ...but in the story ....
Nothing unique yet
But being a sucker for system novel I can't help it
And y is the system a woman(seems to be going in that direction)...............................
Great story
The story is good to read, the concept of chakra is quite fascinating.
And the story is quite slow try to speed up the pace.
l loved it, but try to release more chapters.
When I saw people say they had favorite books, books that originated from this app, I thought that it was pure insanity…That was until I found Garden of the Abyss. This novel is
not only my favorite on this app, but it is quite possibly one of my all time favorites. The immersion, characters, and plot are all peak. Every arc so far has been amazing, especially Purgatory. The author blends fantasy and horror splendidly. I would often find myself rooting for the heroes and then the villains because their causes resonated with me. Garden was my light when I was in a dark place as cringe as it sounds. When I was feeling down I could always come back for a reread, and not get bored. I'm here now for that exact reason and found it crazy that I have not written a review, but hey, better late than never right. I know that this won't be everyone's cup of tea, but I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.
amazing this is definitely a hidden gem!!
the characters are amazing and the way you describe them is cool too
10/10 definitely
Writing Quality - good like i said in the top the author really knows how to put words.
character design - it's good
updating stability - daily
World background - cool!!
Dear Author-sama,
Yo, I got some comment for you to read here.
You should have just made it a xianxia with MC that got some kind of power related to 'programming reality' instead of making a Minecraft Fan-Fic... I mean, what is the use of Command Block if it is not used like in Minecraft? When I first saw this story, I was expecting you to make our MC a law-defying entity, which can defy the law of physics like making a block of dirt float or something similar.
It would have been really cool if you can make it like that and make our MC use the 'physics defy' using the Command Block. Oh yeah, Minecraft is all about gathering resource to increase the player's capabilities such as strength and defense so it is highly recommended to make some customization there.
I won't say your work is good, but I won't say it is bad either. Pretty much not bad, hehe.
But well, what do you think?
By the way, DON'T DIE ON ME!!!
-Sincerely A Certain Homo Sapiens
P.s. exp
This is amazing! Could be a light novel even, though the story is good on the inside the cover needs work, the kind of fonts you have i mean the artwork isn't the issue, but that all aside this book is a 10/10
A genuinely wonderful storyline with a great character design
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I have fall in love with this book i cant wait until More chapterS come but until then i will wait For the new readers please dont give up on this book !