I dunno how I feel about another one of these cultivation novels. Just seems to be repeats of other novels on this site. Of course this kid had to come from modern earth and of course he has to have a super ancient or powerful bloodline that awakens... even mentioning eternal eyes, why not just say he has freaking Sharingans?
Seems to be written by a child. It is pedantic and unimaginative. It keeps talking about an mmo game but doesn't really explain it. I gave it 4 stars only because it does have some potential. It was a struggle to get through 16 chapters.
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The story was surprisingly good huh aside from some grammar mistakes overall is great I think the problem I see here in novel is only it's own title 'Made in America' (In my own opinion) it sounds like lame and nationalistic that's why those kids would skip reading it as they see it on the list maybe you could change it something like "Regressed as a Hollywood director" or "Regressed as a Greatest Hollywood director " something like that. that's all.
Story is very lame, slow, and nothing impressive. Dialogue is very verbose, uninteresting, and unnecessary. The start of the novel kills any enthusiasm to continue reading the story. MC's personality is too ordinary including his intelligence. Only thing that MC has going for him is god-tier luck and even the people around him seem to have it. This novel is literally about you reading about people winning lotteries.
For those of us climbing to the top of the food chain, there can be no mercy. There is but one rule: hunt or be hunted...
On Earth, one had to be mindful of rumors, it was easy to ruin a person's life with some malicious lies. It's because we are all mortals, the laws of the world are different, and individuals could not surpass the power of society.
But not here.
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A guy dies and is reincarnated as a foxgirl with the constant trolling of a goddess. Its so ****** yet so amazingly funny.
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Get ready to have a stroke reading this. It's full of grammatical errors and typos.
You started the novel in a sequence, the way you design your characters is highly appreciable, keep writing fellow novelist, ...............
This book impressed me with the authors ease to dive into and smoothly describe action scenes. It gas a good phase, and pretty intriguing plot. Well done author!
ngl this is one of my first time reading and getting goosebumps specially chapter 2 got me jumping up and down i love this short stories already i hope that it keeps updating[img=update]