Overall from what published so far this is really well written. It reflects really well how addictive some games can be. I really hope that this will continue to be updated sometime in the future.
Though there are few grammatical errors it is good. I like where it is going (thumbs up). Good job author, will be waiting for more. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Very interesting! I was immediately hooked! Nice plot too! The writing is awesome too, I hope I'll learn from you
Overall it's freakin good!!
Keep it up!
Like the plot! The author hooked me in the first chapter, it was written-well. This book is realistic fiction and I knew this book wouldn't fail other readers, it would suprise them even. A good book is when the author knows how to write the emotion that could connect to their readers.
I love how the main character change this book has a whole unique twist and the layout is well prepared the princess,how they knew who Joshua was
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I'm liking the novel so far. Hopefully there will be more chapters ?.
Also I hope the mc doesn't get a human form, it's so overdone. Hopefully he just stays a snake.
Also I'm not really a fan when the monsters end up evolving into more than what their species are. Say a snake turning into a dragon or growing wings.
If flight is an issue just use air magic lolol
No matter what school it is, the time spent in it is a search for your identity, your own self so it's always a good topic to write about. I like your character and I wonder how he will find his own identity, and develop his powers. I am sure his journey will be as interesting as a few chaps I just read.Good luck with the contest!
So far I like the war/military setting and the MC's hussler mentality.I don't get why some people are saying this is complicated. The context is not complicated at all : The MC is living in an empire and this empire is at war against the "barbarians
Their is no overarching plot as of now. Characters are very 2 dimensional. The world development is decent but nothing to write home about. In fact i am giving it a decent rating as the way it is being unveiled it seems promising but at 40 chapters i can't say for sure. But the story flows quite smoothly and the writing is decent. I rather prefer these type of novels despite the lack of originality because they don't have a problem with their pacing and flows unlike most of original novels.
Definitely one of the better trial reads this week.MC is a transmigrator who ends up in a low-talent handsome guys body in the lower rings of a famous sect.His cheat allows him to connect to other peoples "wifi" This wifi can increase his cultivation speed.For example one senior sister increases his cultivation speed by 10x.However his talent is super low, so he's not speed running that much.MC is alright, and doesn't seem arrogant so far (C15).Hope it doesn't devolve into generic trash in the future.