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I do not know if he stole this is not what this is amazing sure he has a system but it's still pretty good I like it very much and give it a chance
Like majority of novels on this site, it starts out well only to become unbearable, cringy and embarrassing to read.
Decent quality of writing, with little errors but poor sentence structure... 3 stars
Updates are reliable... 3 stars
Story development involves almost every single character trying to kill mc with no reason and mc fighting them in retaliation... so plot is nonexistent and in its place is the typical angst and drama associated with silly revenge novels... 1 star because I can't give zero
Character design amounts to mc, fmc and everyone else... all characters beside mc and fmc have changes in behavior for plot convenience (eg: his parents who are rebellious turn meek and cowardly so that mc's enemies can attack him, all so that mc can have his edgy revenge arcs... yes they are only revenge arcs so far)... I give this 1 star otherwise i would give it zero
Worldbuilding involves mentioning of location names... no place is described hence impossible to imagine... 2 stars
im.....*sob*..not crying
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Its filled with several parts that seem as different stories from a variety of people.The feeling of getting to veiw new things that were new tome.
The title looks intriguing, but the MC's character had no development or those things since it is only five chapters.
I really do hope the MC grows for he seems to be so motivated to do this for his granddaughter even though his powers made me confused.
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I am baffled how anyone likes this garbage, the characters are all flat and boring, everyone is stupid, the MCs plot armor is off the charts, he gets exactly what he needs whenever he needs it, no effort, thought or hardwork involved, if you really enjoy this childlike wish fufillment novel, you are the worst.MC: "i need more exp" Author: "Np here's a monster tide"
This is such a fun read!! ?? So…. will it still continue?? If not, where else can I find this??
MC is extremely shameless and selfish. I really can’t stand his personality. someone will help him out and ask him for help later on, and he just lies. It’s really annoying
The story is quite captivating and had a good start to capture readers. Been reading several chapters and so far, I think the plot is good and I’m actually keen to find out what happens in reality while the protagonist is immersed in the game. I liked that you didn’t start with the usual (someone died and just entered the game, etc) but took some time to establish the characters and setting. Think this would be a refreshing read for people who enjoy this genre!
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