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From what I have read, it did not look puppy-love werewolf story. It seemed to be an action-packed, revenge story. so far it's been good, and I would recommend raising the word count in the first dozens or so chapters. Other than that you need to tune the dialogues, it looked too dumb out for the readers and there are a few repetitive words.
Good Job, jd.
waiting with great expectations for this book. sounds interesting and hope it is. I love a good reader!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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absolutely do not read.
Either author or translator made a lot of mistakes. All you have to look at is description:
Strength: When you are not fighting, you will slowly regain 1% of your health.
Age Gracefully: Every year you live, you gain Defense +1.
Strength ? you regain health ???????? It makes no sense. There is more -> its wrong!! MC doesn't have this skill, he gains +1 Defense every time he takes damage, not by every year.
Even description of novel is wrong.
MC gets bloodthirsty GU, 5 chapters later this GU is called Meateating GU .....
not worth anyone's time.
Amazing!! The plot immediately catches you! And it makes you think what I would do in his place !! I loved it !! I already want to read the other chapters, please !!
Nice story, worth giving it a shot especially when this genre is at its peak right now. The author had done great worldbuilding, especially with the concept of a global cataclysm so people have no other means of leisure than to immerse themselves in games that could explain the popularity of this game and a huge fanbase. Keep it up author, waiting for more chapters.
don't read it MC is super beta scared of everyting if he don't outlevel enemy by 10 times he will run away STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA
Muy interesante, me encantan este tipo de fanfics, solo algunos pequeños errores pero gran trabajo.
Por favor no la dejes caer. Tienes todo mi apoyo.
Best. Story. Ever. I could not have lived without it. 10/10 would read agin for sure. I would have been dead without this, but now I can live in peace.
This novel is seriously great, The character development is the best part of this novel and that alone kept me hooked to it. You just keep going author cause you nailed it.
This should also have a powerful cultivation technique. Other than that the mc should also have some other buff in cultivation and other related stuff. The hero should also have some be there strong in combat Techniques. And also please don't fully over exaggerated this novel that much. This novel should also multiple world like lower world, medium world and large world. immortal realms should also be mentioned. Their should also be powerful element's such space, time and choas
