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Nice story! Love it, but could you up it more?
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Really nice.
No face slapping which is a huge plus, well in the first 10 chapters.
MC wakes up in a parallel world that has undergone a spiritual change 100 years ago, causing beasts and dimensional rifts to pop up everywhere.
The MCs cheat is that he can get the description and elements of anything he focuses on, and take elements from these things, if you want an example, read the book,
So far so good, nothing crazy but the little fox part was cute.
Would recommended.
Heelo! Author here.
I am writing this book for the spirity Contest. I hope it will be to your taste.
let's start with few salient features of this book-
1. Urban Fantasy guys... (I'm trying my hand at this genre)
2. lots of Magic ( including vampires, werewolves, mages, demons, gods, etc.,)
3.You need Badass Female characters, yes they will be delivered.
4. lots of side characters with their own story and ships to follow.
5.You want to dip to the Dark side, don't worry we will also go there. ( only occasionally you know, )
6.Mystery and urban fantasy go hand in hand.
7.Mc is getting introduced to the magic world and so are you ( so no fear of getting lost )
;-) just ride along Mc in this shaky novel to witness the action, thriller, mystery, and adventure. Yeah, there are love interests too.
P.S-Happy reading guys, just enjoy your life......
All of these chapters and weird things.....where to start?
What is this?!
This story was written as an entry for the 'Unassuming Protagonist' WPC contest, and I wanted to capture the raw energy and fun that the traditional shonen battle anime and manga gives me in webnovel form.
I am always improving, and I hope it can be reflected in the story too. There is heavy anime and manga inspirations, but no copying or plagirism as I wanted each story arc to tell a slightly different story in this world.
The power sets are defined ambiguously, like how it's usually done in anime. This CONTRASTS the traditional system novels, and I personally have preferred the ambiguity, leaving things up in the air for discussions and power scaling later on.
Seasons?! And Volumes?!
Think of reading this story like watching an anime or reading a manga, and each of the major story arcs are organized into various seasons. Each of the season tells a complete story, while leaving room for more to happen.
So many Auxiliary Chapters!
They are like the little scribble or author's note/thoughts, kinda like bonus chapters which gives supplementary information for the story.
Does everybody read minds, or can I not use grammarly?!
'Some say that the Brit speaks the true English, the language of the majesty herself.'
"Aight if you wanna be wrong, and not be free, then so be it!"
It really is a matter of differing conventions between the British English and American English. I was educated in the UK in the past six years, and this is what I am used to doing frankly. I hope this won't detract away from the reading experience itself though.
I don't like this novel. MC has a degree in administration, applies to be a fitness coach...why?
Plans on quitting his job. Saves a girl from a coworker who was going to assault her. Girl ask if he could be a witness for the incident and report it to the police, refuses...tf.
"why?"
"...for the clubs reputation"
I stopped reading after that.
"Stalemate, huh. Well, best two out of three... err not again, best three out of five? Four out of seven?"
Chu Kuangren is a sore loser who keeps pestering his opponents for rematches until he's asking for best 11 out of 21. Still, he always wins eventually, making him Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws.
I'm reading the raw currently I'm at chapter 77 and I have bad news... I guess they will also cut one chapter at half like the other novel "Grandson of the Holy Emperor is a necromancer." and the good news is the novel is really great and you won't be disappointed hope so..
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I am tired of these video game novels coming in. The good ones gets pushed back at the back or worse never see the light afterwards. It's getting harder to read with anticipation. Same old type getting recycled.
I loved this story and all that goes with it! It was different than what I was expecting but it was still a great read.
The one thing I would nitpick at while reading this all in a couple days, is the fights. Sometimes they just drag on and on! There is nearly 100 chapters of fighting and dungeon diving in less than 300 chapters.
