You did a great job with this story I love how you portrayed the main character and I think you did a great job balancing the system this story has a great plot so far and I just really can't wait to see what you do next keep up the great work!
I'm giving myself 5 stars again. I can only apologise to everyone who told me to continue, I failed you guys... well SIKE, I guess?? I'm back bit*hes!!!
Definitely the best story out of this batch. Even IF the story sucks later, the writing quality is very high these 60 chapters. It's the first time I see a fluffy Xianxia with other elements added to the story. All perfectly executed cliches!
It's slowly progressing to a serious xianxia. I have a lot of high expectations but also a bit skeptical since I'm not sure where it's going. I can only hope there's no Harem and Master Deer being Main Heroine.
amazing bro. .it's good you should try to publish it more you know.... . . ... . .. . .... .... .. ..... . ........ . .. ....... m. . .... ...
First about the synopsis, though it is short, it made me curious and that's a good start for a book. Coming to the story though it seems like a common weak to strong, it is very different. The MC is so life like and understand his emotions and this cis because of smooth and perfect writing skills of the author. Definetely a great book.
The story is pretty good so far. I like the quality and detailed background and all, just MC needs to show off power more, though I get why he's not, reasonable motives. Maybe less buildup, more climax scenes. Or just write more, don't leave us waiting. Keep it up!
am not really into video games novel but damn this is a good one to read. am just a bit dizzy with the compacted paragraphs that looks so scary on my phone but who cares.. i will add this to my novels that I will binge read soon..
great job author!
I started if ficool by reading a book that was featured under new, then when I was done, I contacted the author via discord and asked when next she'd update and she told me tomorrow but she also said in the mean time I could check out a book called "in love". When she sent the link, I clicked it and began reading and...... I am IN Love with this book!
Finally something decent again.. its been a while.Especially in terms of translation WN has been getting really bad recently so please pick this one not the MTL bs.
Where's the special god level talent?.......................................................................................................
It's the story uniqueness for me.. and there is nothing more good than reading a story that leaves an impressionSo far I've been stuck and there is nothing more I want to say that! UPLOAD A NEW CHAPTER...
Didn't expect him to really become a villain and not a hero who became a villain by saying they're misunderstood and giving excuses like the world isn't black and white. However, his sect principles are really dumb.