This story is okay ish, I guess it's not too bad. The writing doesn't help it tho. It's not like extremely bad, but it does get in the way a little bit. As others say, you need to work on your maths and the currency system otherwise it just feels off and you can't really put a value on things
NOTHING IS CONFIRMED, SO AS TO SAY THIS IS JUST THE START. THEN WHY ARE THERE AN EMPEROR/SAGE CULTIVATION AT THE START ?TOTAL SCORE ... 3.0
I think this is the story of human who falls into monster hunter 2 stars rank after that into darksouls and then climbing up to G rank.so now for real. its has interisting charakters and each is for me truly unique. I have never seen such a scumbag as hero nor such a badass anti hero. he really seem (EVIL). the story is quite cliche but the hero makes it so different from afurita thats you think he is great charakter atleast I think so and mc is simply unlucky but show that an immortal with strong will is the ultimate winner like emperors domination or the returner. personality of the mc was great but change after and preor change I think quite constand. I hope this helped somenpeople and sry for my bad english
awesome story, perfectly written.I loved it, I honestly love the research done to create the story and how the author research and start the chapter using an awesome quote.I loved the story, keep it up, and good luck!
Author here. Originally I posted this story back in January, taking it down as it was in another competition. However, since I did not have any great success in said competition, I have decided to upload exclusively to Webnovel.First volume is complete and I will be releasing 2 chapters a day while I continue to write the Second volume. For those of you who have already read the first volume, there have been no changes so unless you wish to rehash what you've already read, then there's no need to read again.A few points to note below:No romance in first volume despite the romance tag. MC is in Middle School and I am not one to write such things.This is primarily a slice-of-life/youth drama novel, mixing School Life and competitive sports together.The book is based in Japan. Names are read as (First name, Family name) ie: Ken Takagi, Daichi Suzuki.There are some Japanese puns/references throughout which I do my best to explain afterwards, even if it takes some of the humor away from it.No I am not Japanese, however I do my best to research everything possible.Most importantly, I hope you enjoy the story. Please feel free to comment below or on any of the chapters should you feel the urge to, I'd be happy to answer them.
this books is fantastic, great read for anyone looking for some exciting scenes and action. definitely a must read something that everyone should have
Well Author you should have given the title PUBG touch down ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Op to the point of boring, ✅ Rampant Racism, ✅ Sexism, ✅ Chinese novel, ✅ Nothing more needs to be said...
This book is very good at starting, and here is what I mean. We first see that this guy is looking through something to find a cure for himself. Then, the book introduces who he is and how he got that point. It's a way to start the story without having to tell the background first.
chickie nuggies! it's like the author is begging me to stop reading. He's a college student but he sounds like a kid. and why does he keep complaining about the "stupid" system? are you trying to be funny author?if yes, pls stop.
I was reading this on Wattpad for a while and then it stopped, I'm so glad I found it here it is definitely one of my favorite stories of all time.
I LOVE THIS BOOK ITS AWESOME!!! I JUST WISH HE COULD GET A SECOND PET AND BE ANOTHER DRAGON THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!!