Hello everyone author here. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my book. I know I have a bad schedule making it hard for me to update like promised. But I will keep trying my best so please keep supporting my book.
Good story is worth it of your time and the pace of story is good too! I think the problem here the story development, base of the current story development more likely the incoming plot of story only revolves on girls.I'm hoping that I'm wrong!
After i read a few chapters i really like your story. your theme really got me interested to read more chapters. but if i can critique your book, there are some misspellings in terms of punctuation. I hope that in the future it will be better
This story is an uncut gem that will surely shine with some polishing...Having your sister suicide is traumatizing and then learning that she was may have been killed must be harsh on our MC but that sets the stage for his future development. Excited to read how the future unfolds for Red..Good work author!
I cant stress enough HOW AMAZING THIS BOOK IS.Or how much i love it! It has such an interesting story plot and the character development so far is supppppeeeerrrrr gooooooodd!!!!!!Props to the author, who did an amazing job!!!!!
Nice start! Your grammar and writing style are all top-notch! The synopsis was very interesting and hooked me on. Good job author! Keep it up!
please update, we need more chapters these can't satisfy our hunger, they just stuck in our teeth hence we were not even able to enjoy them please update them
I love the character. He is cunning, logical and perfectly reflects his past. This is an underappreciated work and i think that this should be continued. I do not understand why this was dropped.
I really like this novel it’s almost a completely original idea and it really opens the mind to a new perspective I highly recommend this to those who need a interesting read
Hi Author, Romance Please?I love everything about your novel.please update mooooooooore!!! it's so beautifuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuul!!!
It’s a mildly interesting concept, it isn’t anything groundbreaking but it’s kinda entertaining. The grammar is horrible and is what made me choose to drop the novel. If the story and the development of characters was better I could read around the grammar but it didn’t engage me enough to even try.
I’m going to shamelessly give myself a 5 star review just because I can. Hope you guys enjoy my story! I still haven’t found out how to improve the spacing on my novel. If anyone knows how to do that please let me know. Thanks!