I find the pace slow other then that evil neutral mc a very nice background and the mc is sometimes dumb but other times smart but its still 30 chps so i cant say much.
Well am really glad that another wonderful football novel is making waves on this platform please ensure to keep updating regularly thanks
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What better day to read this masterpiece than the Christmas Eve
It was an overall ok novel from what i read, i just got annoyed at how everything he seemed to do seemed to force an advancement in the overall plot, most things shouldn't effect everyone else, he makes loads of really stupid decisions which he doesn't seem to lean from which annoys me, and half of each chapter just seems to be him bitching and complaining about one thing or another, i skipped in 5 chapters hoping it would improve, but it seemed he still complains so i'm dropping the book
Eh.. I guess the story is nice? This is the author’s first time writing, I guess. There are a lot of beginner mistakes but he seems to want to improve and learn so I think people should give him a try and help whenever they can. One meaningful comment can help. But, since I know how people are here, I doubt I’ll see a lot of that. It will probably be hate and condemnation. But, at least some people who like this novel will try and help the author. I wish him luck. I didn’t read a lot so this could be counted as a spam review since I didn’t say anything meaningful.
This should be categorized as science fiction man.. I don't know looks like it. The writer had described the different personality of the characters.. It's better than I expected..
dropped after chapter 131.author seems to forget things intentionally .some times the Mc is all knowledgeable .sometimes mc doesn't know the basic of things.dropped because the author tried to insert previous characters into the story out of nowhere.oh if u have plotholes one time ,I can understand but repeating the same mistakes a number times even when you have an audience giving u reviews of your work is unprofessional .had a lot of hopes for this one. but when illogical straits keep on stacking i can't continue this isnt the first popular novel I have dropped bcos of this detail.
A good novel! as fas as the latest update (185)
typical and sad _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, the MC is just meh, so much for two lifetime of experience the attitude does not show it at all pretty much like a copy paste of that other one with the same style, although that one has a slightly better MC
This is a high quality read. The first few chapters are spent setting up the world and the core cast of characters and I must say I was quite immersed and can't wait to read more. The protagonist is a great well-rounded character, facing countless obstacles in her early life, but has a strong personality as is evidenced by the way she defends herself verbally and physically when a gang of bullies target her. Spelling and grammar are top top notch and the prose flows along nicely, making this easy to read and enjoyable. Highly recommended reading!
quite entertaining, with good world-building I thoroughly enjoy it even though it is a fan fic but this is literally the only fan fic I like.