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Nice start to a good novel! Please continue updating
Wait you already started!!!
ok ok ok ok, I'm going to start now, today begins out war!
But I have do have to admit you're doing good for a newbie, zero, but it'll take more than this to beat me muahaha...
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What's your insta/discord? I'll follow you.
The author struggles to make something original so he sticks to the same process of mc gets bullied > mc gets powerup > mc kills the bully > bully's relatives avenges the bullies > mc kills the bully's relatives > repeat. It's fun for the first few cycles, but it gets bland as it goes. Although the novel follows the same progression of "doing something new for a change," it's actually basically just a coverup of the fact that the author is incapable of further developing something thus scrapping it and making a new one, on the premise that the story is "developing" when clearly, it's just making a new slate to follow the same cycle, of which only the names of people, places and realms changed.
Errors all over the place and even a Name change at Chapter 20
What is a Blue Eyes White Dragon doing there? Don’t tell me this is some sort of fan-fiction about a crossover between Yugioh and Pokemon.
Other than that, he has already peaked at 9,999? Pathetic.
I like this novel a lot but, I wish the updates were more consistent, because I want to read more of this great story. Alas, I can't because it hasn't been updated.
Here is the review after reading first five chapters.
Writing Quality: 4/5 as there are still few mistakes that needs to be taken care of. However, its understandable and with a few editing, it can get 5/5.
Updates: Knowing Swan, you can trust the work ethic and the update stability. A solid 5/5.
Story Development: Not much till now, but the 1st chapter and the foreshadowing with all the stuffs happening is something to look forward to.
Character Design: I like our MC Alix. He seems closer to realism while still remaining a fictional character. I hope I was clear enough XD.
World Background: Not much revealed but I am looking forward to it.
And cover! Its OP asf.
The grammar is pretty terrible, only made it to chapter 6 there is a mistake in just about every sentence. story did seem promising though, sadly the english isn’t good and couldnt stand it.
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