great... while reading I was felt like all the scenes were running in front of my eyes...all the characters were designed by you very well....keep writing [img=recommend]
Love love love. This writing is so good. I recommend this book if you want to take your time enjoying a good story. The ML is so freaking hot. I feel like he loves the MC, and everyone else he might murder. I love when the MC bosses him around and the dangerous ML just takes it. Well, maybe he pokes back for fun. Great story. Keep going!
The best of its weekly trial but unfortunately it wasn't picked I hope it gets picked up again later though
I've read through this twice now, extremely excited for more and the only complaint i have is that there's not more of it.This story has just so much potential and life to it and the premise is just so incredibly captivating, i really just wish there were thousands of chapters to read instead of hundreds.
Currently at chapter 35 and so far it didn’t disappoint me. Yea during the 1st 10 chapters the writing will turn you off( I gave up on this novel 6x b4 Ifinnaly decided to get past the second chapter) but it somewhat gets better,the Author said he’d rewrite the 1st few chaps so……
it starts off great but starts to get worse. MC feels weaker over time. Author doesn't finish some plot points or leaves the states of relationships for ages and ages. Author shows early on that it can be annoying to be shown something that either you can't use or is taken away with the aranus soul. and the. starts to do that over and over. this just makes it frustrating to read. also any chapters that are announcements or clarifications that arnt part of the story should not be paid chapters.
I love the story as well the world background..the characters are also very good..but the stability of updating is not that much high....plz at least give us 4ch / week...
It’s a very interesting,loveable it touches your heart. 10.
It is a very good novel, i rceally liked it and i hope thata there will be more thousands chapters
what kind of novel is this? reincarnation? or just vmmorpg? or xianxia?
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Sorry guys, I will be on hold for about 3 weeks. I am on a field exercise with my unit. I will try to write as much as possible in between and come back with a mass release. So sorry for the break.
I like your contrasting characters. They spark curiosity. Your dystopian vision of the future is Terminator meets Humans, but I am confident it will become something entirely yours when you are done. You have a simple flair and succinct style that is easy to read and interesting. I look forward to your next Chapters.