Second review, because why not? I've read pass 100 chapters already. First, the influence of the novel is immense for me may it be for better or for worse. I like it despite its discrepancies, so the review might not be helpful for the other readers. As I said in my last post, I'm a friend of the author and I'm a little bit biased about wanting him to succeed in his writing career. (I'm writing the review for other readers to know the charm, because Coffee has all my input already.)Writing Quality: 4 StarsHe said it himself in the aux chapter, what he uploads are the first drafts and would only even edit the free chapters. I find his words skewed, but I understood when he said he'd probably edit his premium chapters as well when he's done with the four-month guaranteed payment. Straight four months, one chapter daily is tough for his laziness, so I'm cutting him the slack. So far, I enjoyed the chapters he sends each and every day. I haven't gotten used of the recurring monologues, but they're all compensated by the low-key talking-and-walking signature happening between characters (the scenes are mostly refreshing to read), and what I like best are the surreal mind reading shenanigans. I've never read a book before that's so out of the norm. Of course, it has to be done somewhere before, but the way they're being executed are cleaner than the action scenes. I like the vigor.Stability of Updates: 2 StarsEasy five stars if the updates are linear, but volume three being simulpublished is a mess. Especially when Volume 2 gets a chapter in a week when Volume 3 has six. Please, take it the other way around. I understand that Volume 3 is another story, but if I'm a regular reader, I won't open the next book unless I've finished what's before it.Story Development: 3 StarsTbh, the structure is also a mess. But because the author was so insistent it's a "literary metafiction
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I had to read it a lot of times to try and understand the world, so I'd say try to improve on it. But the quality of the writing is very good, which at least gives a better understanding of the book.
I really love this novel but can you put a side chapter describing the characters after all we don't read the novel chapter after chapter we wait until we collect fifty or hundred chapters and after all that time it's hard to remember how the characters look like can you, please do that
Hi I'm one of the translators for this novel and it was so fun to translate (and hopefully fun to read, for you)! The characters are fun and the story is just gearing up, so please review and support so that we can continue working on it!!
Author(s)
Wang Zi's Old Bun
Status in COO
Ongoing
The once most powerful ancient forbidden divine art, the Immemorial Dragon Elephant Art has been lost for millions upon millions of years.
Countless years later, youth Lin Feng who was down on his luck, managed to obtain the number one ancient forbidden divine art, the Immemorial Dragon Elephant Art by chance.
When Lin Feng departed from a tiny city of the northern-most area in the world, a legendary story would begin.
This is a world with experts as many as the trees in a forest, a world where different races vyes for supremacy.
Who shall rule over destiny in this boundlessly vast land?
Depending on the Immemorial Dragon Elephant Art, Lin Feng battle the heavens and fought the earth, sweeping aside all experts with dominance, tyrannically ruling the myriad realms
Like this one. Please release it as soon as possible. Can not wait for this one to be released...... i really really want this novel like i want to eat...
Another sht monster mc novel. Came to read monster mc but all this story is so far, is that the mc is being mind controlled, a slave and pet.
Something that annoys about this is how everyone is loving the humans when they make a slave outta the mc. In the comments everyone says he is being treaded nice etc but this is the most dumb thing I have seen. Thyere being nice ? They are going to SELL him ? They treat him nice to get more money when they sell him. can go on but already said loads in the comments xD
Something that annoys me in monster novels is that they authors are all human superiority. I wanted to read this novel bc he is NOT human. Not so you can just make him human later on, a hybrid of human and beast etc
Dunno about the rest of the story but from what I have read it is an alright start made terrible. If your into the mc being pet/slave then good for you and might be worth the read. If looking for a pure monster mc story then dont bother.
gl to author, bye
I was a bit cringe at the beginning seeing that It's the same introduction to the other Isekai Manga/Novel I read, specially with OP Ability that was received from a God/Goddess/Entity, but the plot changed my view of the story, sure he is a bit arrogant and clumsy like the other Isekai Mc I know but how he adapts and how he follows what he aspires to be is what made him different from the rest. keep up the good work and keep writing dude, this is a really great book.
mmmm, a new type of novels, power, love, fight, wars, death i really liked your novel auther and wating more from you, we are all here, so erntren us good heheheh
Nice story!!!!Pls continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!