If you want to read a book that constantly says “oh wow so strong” “how is that possible” “how did he do that” “can I be like that” then this book is for you this book sucks so bad
Pretty much copy paste of the previous ones, nothing new at all. Ignoring everything with global transmigration from now on. Would give it a 0 star if I could.
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Author is racist, in the second and third chapter there were some thugs who 'happened' to all be black. When Ron (the MC) confronts them, he calls them "Slaves", and, "The people that god spurned".
Not very good compared to other sign in novels especially when looking at the power scaling of his cultivation, the setting's cultivation system and the frequency and quality of sign in rewards. Pretty much completely skipped 2 full realms only to then put a huge blockade to reach from the third to the fourth and just stall it out. A lot of irrelevant information, generally not very interesting since sign in rewards are hardly mentioned and the progress is so slow. wouldn't recommend.
you get better everytime, try your best, don't give up the novel it's quite good for my opinion, some gramitical errors but still I Like the story
the book is one of the best books I have ever read. it should be transformed into a movie already please, it would be a blockbuster. I assure you
It was good but a lil lacking but the story base was good. It world be good if you keep up the good work. Since this is your first work it might be a little down but you’ll get better with time so just hang in there.
Extremely good grammar that makes the story come alive. The characters are great, and the story is written with a good sense of detail VS flow. Thanks for this author.
100 chapters Sigh* This as far i can go. I enjoyed this novel mainly bec of the wholesome parts ?. But the mc is nothing special he is mainly used as a boy toy and most of the time helping his girls sort out ther problems all in name of love??♂️
There was a little bit of character development but at the same time it wasnt enough for that many chapters he just didnt change that much..
It does get frustrasting reading about how the mc has nothing going on for him as you read on.
Yes Unfortunatly the MC is all talk half of the time mainly when it about to his life. Granted he had his moments but he does not make reasonable goals and it feels like he has barely no ambitions to improve his Situation. Basically he does not take any practical steps so far. Tbf He does often go to the library? But finds Little answers that will help with explaining his power. Tho it just ends up his girlfreinds find all answers for him.
To me the MC is just useless id rather read a novel about his girlfriend lol. At the end of the day he does not have his prioritys right as he is all over the place with his emotions.
But hey this just i what think✌️
Good luck