"I'm so thrilled to hear that you reached your goal. ..."Congratulations on your incredible success! ..."I saw you work so hard every day to achieve this accomplishment, and I can't think of anyone who deserves it more. ..."Cheers to you for a job well done!
Interesting enough to be followed and makes on read more as the story develops. questions are popping up as one reads further. There are questions to the many-threading story as claimed since there seemed to be many stories all being developed along the way.
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Only a few chapters in and here is my review. Professional story! That's all that comes to mind when I read this book. It's very detailed and has a nice plot. The author seems to have a set direction for the story, which gives the writing a sense of purpose (something not seen often on these webnovel books). I noticed a few mysteries already popping up that are itching for an answer.No big cons with this book. It's another great system read that could find a solid fan base on webnovel. I see a bright future for this book and the author. (4.8 whish it could be adjusted a bit higher)On a side-note : Idk how you will do it, but a story needs something that stands out in the beginning. Whether its a unique MC(blind, deaf, ect.), setting (growing up in a dumpster), or a mystery. You have some of these, but the truly great stories put their own twist. Just my little opinion, nothing more :)
I wish I like this more....Pros Great premise Mc, not a Gary Stu nor a wimpMc, not a lecherous psychopath villain who kills anyoneevryoneGood background even though it's a little cliche it is well put together ConsSoooo much dialogue (15 chapters in and all he's done since his regression was talk about what he might do and ask questions to the "ghost") is honestly the reason why I'm dropping. That and the way the dialogue feels somewhat forced and unnaturalSubpar writing style2d characters
Interesting... But this novel reminds me of a novel called the Reincarnation of the strongest sword God, by Lucky old cat. It looks similar regarding levels, tiers, equipments and others.Either way, it's interesting please continue
Considering it's a translation, I won't bother reviewing the story. Suffice it to say, it's a dumpster fire. Read if you feel like your life is too long.As for the translation. It's understandable, even if the use of English is poor.
Quise leer, intenté leer. Pero no pase del capítulo 15,el MC está haciendo todo lo que le dice el npc ese no hace nada por el mismo, lo que le pasa en la vida real es lo mismo que muchas otras historias donde es intimidado y de repente reparte cachetadas a todos lados, no es mi tasa de te
I really want to thank all of you readers for the support you are giving my story, this makes me very happy!NOW TOWARDS THE 100K OF VIEWS!!!!
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Good read to pass the time, Honestly this is in the top 3 of this weeks trial read.= -----------------------------------------------------------------
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