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This is the first time since learning how to read that I actually personally hated a main character ,even though the author meant for him to be like that, the way he is written leaves a bitter taste in my mouth ruining the story for me.
an interesting villan novel. really interesting till now. please don't drop it author.
I like the characters and the story, it seems to be developing in an interesting direction. I hope it will keep getting. new chapters
Really good so far! I’m looking forward to more, good job :)
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uhh i think this novel is twin fang will be the main focus and the others will revolve around them but why i feel twin fang and the other revolves around wang hao -_- this is confused with the synopsis telling Fang Lin to reach the top of both lines that's there and I think he will be the main focus of the novelBut this is a good novel :):)
This novel definitely has potential, but based off of the synopsis you have to be creative, and imaginative enough for each reincarnation ??????????????
Now am wondering if this the first time the author is writing a novel the story it's not bad problem is the author wrote as if it's just for the sake..it has no plot plus it's short including its chapters no taste at all it's so dull
Good booed looking forward to the ending with hopes of twist and turns. I appreciate how it drew my attention because on the norm..i don't read books like this.
Patience is one thing but the mc doesn't Even show a bit of frustration and anger despite being mistreated by national team selectors and then being benched just thinks that he just needs to play honestly its becoming frustrating to continue reading now it seems he doesn't even have a spine to confront and seem coward if you're gonna make him "god of football" as the tiltle says atleast make him look like that he is way to laid back.and what's this bullshit about i will prove with my performance you can't just fu*ki*g keep getting him subbed on last minutes and like a hero he will score hattrick like he did in the last league game.
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