So let me start by saying I have generally enjoyed this novel. It has a different focus and theme than a lot on the platform, and that not only is unique but also refreshing.On other hand I also have a few issues with it as well. (Tldr. Not bad for a quick filler read, but needs improvement)1. A very forgetful (or stupid MC)This guy would forget where his glasses were right after he put them on. I feel like the shock the author is trying to portray at certain plot events was simply done incorrectly, resulting in a character that can't understand why anything is happening when he was already explained thoroughly before.2. Pacing feels offI can 200% get behind a novel that doesn't drag its feet, but this feels almost to rushed. Or maybe it is too undetailed? There is just a lot of athletic results before and after training, then face smacking. While information is given about athletics (something the average reader may not know about), I feel like I'm missing the sweat and tears these athletes are putting in, or the work the MC is doing with them. I dont really feel like much is ever happening as time flies by.3. A very undetailed systemSystems are fun and all, and I love myself a good sentient one. But I feel as if there is no proper explanation how or why anything the system is doing happens. Tieing into the previous point, since there is no description of how anything happens, it feels as if everything is normal but results are magically different for no other reason than "because system" The systems usage here feels like the usage of "Magic" in poorly written fantasy novels. It just does whatever helps the plot/MC without proper reasoning or rules.4. Overly repetative chapters.This is a theme I've noticed in many novels and is honestly my biggest problem with this one. Through half a chapter a series of events will happen, and after someone gets their face slapped they reflect on EVERYTHING that happened. I'm not talking a sad "i regret misjudging them so rashly" comment. I mean a straight up multiparagraph synopsis of everything that went down. It's important to show proper repercussions for actions, especially for antagonists, but damn does it seem like the author is trying to add filler, constantly. It may be due to translations issues but honestly it just feels silly at times.That's about it. All said and done I still enjoy this novel for what it is and plan to keep reading. Will update this review as neccessary. Have a great day/night, and thank you author and translators for your hard work! <3
was wondering why this book was number 1 with powerstones and after checking who voted i saw that page 7 until 17 was filled with the same name
Unlike most novels this one feels professionally written. While the MC is of the OP variety he is truly talented rather than getting to hit an ‘I win’ button just to progress the plot. Translation quality is excellent. There is a large cast of characters but they will all come to feel like friends because they are given enough personality that even if they aren’t encountered for 50 chapters when you see them next you don’t wonder who that are but what they have been doing since you last saw them. A must read on this site in my humble opinion.
Honest review after 90+ chapters! A lot of people have been thrown off in the first chapter because of the MC's attitude, and especially since he got a green hat, like what the synopsis stated. However, I assure that this only happens in the first chapter. After he got the system, his worldview would slowly change, and his way of handling things would change for the better as well. As long as you can get past the first chapter, I assure you that his attitude shown in the first chapter won't show up again. Now, as English is not my main language, it is subpar compared to others. A lot of readers have also been correcting my mistakes, which I appreciate quite a lot. For updates. I usually upload 1 chapter a day but with bonus chapters obtained from weekly goals, and bonus chapters from sponsors, I would sometimes upload more than 3 chapters in a single day. Story development. As this is a kind of slice of life and wish fulfillment story, the story does not progress very quickly where more than a week will pass after a single chapter. Character design is okay. Although it might not be the best, but I assure you that I sure did my best to make them more alive. World background is also being slowly introduced to avoid info dumps as much as possible. That's all. I hope you give this novel a try! Thank you!
I like this book so much
Love reading this book.
I love this series! I wish they can turn it into a movie
I love the book! I was great cant wait to read the next one
I love this novel. But wish I knew the story would end in the middle of the book. I have waited for a month for updates. If this story ever gets updated I will finish the book . And remember the authors name and never read anymore books from her. Also will delete this app.
I loved it
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waiting for next chapter